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Newcastle safari sunset...

PostPosted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 9:00 pm
by surenj
I think you have already seen various re-incarnations of this beautiful vista we experienced that day.

This is a two shot pano which required a bit of effort as I took them too wide!

C&C appreciated.

Image

Re: Newcastle safari sunset...

PostPosted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 9:29 pm
by chrisk
the colours are truly beautiful; imo though my eyes wander looking for something to hold my attention. i think it needs something to anchor it personally...horizon dead centre doesnt help in this regard either.

Re: Newcastle safari sunset...

PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2010 11:09 am
by bigsarg7
I tend to agree in regards to the image and my eyes wandering! But i dont mean to say i don't like it, as i really do, i love the reflections in the water you captured and how the colors are reflected so well. If it were my shot i'd be stoked!! So yeah love it, in my opinion I think you did a great job!

Re: Newcastle safari sunset...

PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2010 2:35 pm
by Big V
Crop the left a little and all the probs are solved..Love the colours!

Re: Newcastle safari sunset...

PostPosted: Fri Oct 15, 2010 12:41 pm
by norwest
Love the colours. Eastern side of Stockton bridge?

Re: Newcastle safari sunset...

PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 1:32 am
by biggerry
Suren, this shot looks premo on da telephone! I like the version as shown, I think with colours like this, which are the primary focus, symmetry and reflections are a great idea. Cropping to thirds I think would lose something - it would be ok if there was another focus point though.

As bigv mentioned cropping the left might help, imo just to remove those dark hangover.

Re: Newcastle safari sunset...

PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:58 pm
by stubbsy
Suren

You've framed this well for the reasons already covered above. While the clump of rocks on the left detracts from the image I'd be more inclined to clone them out than crop the image.

Re: Newcastle safari sunset...

PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 9:31 pm
by surenj
Thanks boys for pointing out the obvious distraction in the lower left that I had overlooked!! :roll: I am also in favour of cloning rather than cropping this would cause alot of imbalance as it doesn't really have a focal point.

I deliberately didn't include a strong focal point in this one as I wanted the viewer to dart around a bit looking at the colors and the reflection. [I am usually a strong follower of the foreground 'interest' :wink: ]

Gerry, EVERYTHING looks better on the telephone I find. it enhances colors and hides focus issues... :mrgreen:

Norwest, you are correct on the location. We were passing by returning from the airshow.