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Electrifying Sculptures

PostPosted: Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:11 am
by surenj
Has a brief opportunity to avoid the crowds tonight. The weather was quite nasty with pretty strong sea spray which made the air quite misty. On the plus side, I got parking right in front of the park near Tamarama beach.

As usual for your critique..

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Re: Electrifying Sculptures

PostPosted: Sun Oct 31, 2010 8:24 am
by Mr Darcy
#1 doesn't work for me, but I think your lighting of #2 & #3 really add something to the image. I think the light mist helped too

#3 I would prefer that the shadow behind the sculpture wasn't there. It seems at odds with the rest of the lighting. Is that the moon in shot, or a pause with your torch?

Re: Electrifying Sculptures

PostPosted: Sun Oct 31, 2010 11:21 am
by Wink
I really like #3.
I agree with Mr Darcy about the light. The light on the ground is a little distracting.

Re: Electrifying Sculptures

PostPosted: Sun Oct 31, 2010 3:40 pm
by stubbsy
Suren

Those second 2 are mesmerising. Had it not been for the comments from the others I'd not have realised this was done with light painting. Before I read the comments I was trying to work our how all that wispy smoke ended up there. 2 thumbs up

Re: Electrifying Sculptures

PostPosted: Sun Oct 31, 2010 4:14 pm
by Matt. K
Last 2 are outstanding! Immaculate technique and beautifully creative. Take a bow.

Re: Electrifying Sculptures

PostPosted: Sun Oct 31, 2010 8:07 pm
by biggerry
Suren, that last one is very nicely done, great concept, the only issue I have is with the excessive light foreground and grass, I would just PP darken that and it would be steller!

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Re: Electrifying Sculptures

PostPosted: Mon Nov 01, 2010 12:09 am
by Big V
Could you please explain how much of this is done on location and if any is post. Number 3 works best for me.

Re: Electrifying Sculptures

PostPosted: Mon Nov 01, 2010 6:54 pm
by surenj
Thanks everyone for your feedback.

I will have a look at darkening the foreground a bit.(on my desktop) I find it's clumsy to do adjustments on a laptop with a trackpad...

Big V, this is done with a EL wire (for electricity) and torch (non diffused) just to illuminate the sculpture. No PS on this one! Not as dangerous as steel wool.. :wink:

#1 has no EL wire ... Just plain torch. :mrgreen:

Re: Electrifying Sculptures

PostPosted: Mon Nov 01, 2010 8:17 pm
by DebT
Great stuff Surenj !
DebT

Re: Electrifying Sculptures

PostPosted: Mon Nov 01, 2010 8:48 pm
by stubbsy
surenj wrote:Big V, this is done with a EL wire (for electricity)

And here is some info on the stuff to save the curious some keystrokes

Re: Electrifying Sculptures

PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:00 pm
by colin_12
These are cool Surenj

Re: Electrifying Sculptures

PostPosted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 8:45 pm
by Matt. K
So where do you get this stuff? (EL wire). It looks like fun!

Re: Electrifying Sculptures

PostPosted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 11:12 pm
by surenj