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VotW - irresistable and eternalI was taken by the juxtaposition of the water and the rocks here. Movement and stillness. Irresistible force and immovable object etc. But the photo hasn't quite worked.
Any suggestions? Again the juxtaposition of water and rock. The foreground rock was very dark. I used a flash to lift it just a tad. Think of it as old school HDR. Others have posted much better photos of the fungi than I managed to take, but these give you a concept of size. Greg
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It could be me but it sort of looks like the shutter speed on this may have been too slow to freeze the water but too fast to give it that long whispy feel. One or the other extremem may have worked better?
Yes I saw you setup on the rock with flash out and was wondering what you were doing It seemed a very! long way from the falls up the top D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
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Now I realise just how small the fungi really is! Thanks for posting the shots from this perspective.
Re: VotW - irresistable and eternalThe second and third pictures are,
I believe, the best.
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it has interesting elements and shapes in an abstract sense - I reckon pushing the textures of the water and rock to an abstract level might make it more than what it is...
lol, classic - that is one crazy line created by the rock silhouette! I would crop out the OOF rock in the bottom of the image.
I hear ya there! you should have seen my response to Colins first fungi find - i struggled to see it even with him pointing at it
that shot is probably my favourite from this lot - nicely composed and good use of the surrounding features... gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
Re: VotW - irresistable and eternalI really like the third Greg. Nicely done
Regards Colin
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Re: VotW - irresistable and eternalI like the first image Greg. It has strong elements of power....it's organic, almost animal, living, and the composition really grabs me. Unusual image....fine image...colours perfect for effect. A mystery that pops when you decode it.
Regards
Matt. K
Re: VotW - irresistable and eternalI like #1, it is a very unconventional take on the subject and you have pulled it off nicely. Glad to see something that is less bleeding obvious than everything that everyone else has posted so far.
I knew we forgot to take size reference shots of all that fungi Cameron
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Re: VotW - irresistable and eternal#1 is quite interesting!
Maybe you could think about B&W as well as increasing the contrast and sharpness a bit (especially of the rocks).
Re: VotW - irresistable and eternalGreg
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Re: VotW - irresistable and eternalI want me some of them thar gold ingots!
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Re: VotW - irresistable and eternalHey greg, heres what I had in mind... if you look closely you can see a Llama
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Re: VotW - irresistable and eternalGreg, I prefer your BW compared to the original.
On my phone Gerrys version looks posterised. ?
Re: VotW - irresistable and eternalI really like the last two. Give a good idea of relative size scale. Love the detail too.
Alex
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