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Stitched panos using my Nikon Series E 28mm f/2.8 and Cokin ND Grad filters

Whoops...forgot to move my bag


Bag gone! colours lifted slightly....is this enough?





EDIT - may have gone overboard with the colours


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Cameron, they both click through to the first image

They seem a little washed out and lacking in colour on my monitor.

I think there is a little too much foreground on the left of the first image. My eyes are drawn to the brightness of the rock you are standing on rather than the glorious view.

I can see your camera bag in the first image too.

I think the second image could be improved if you crop out the white rock on the left.

Just my thoughts...

Mr Darcy wrote:Cameron, they both click through to the first image

Thanks Greg...that has now been fixed (can I blame the late night posting for that error?)

Killakoala wrote:They seem a little washed out and lacking in colour on my monitor.

I think this calls for a revisit, I'm finally working with a calibrated screen so it should make things easier for me.

Killakoala wrote:I think there is a little too much foreground on the left of the first image. My eyes are drawn to the brightness of the rock you are standing on rather than the glorious view.

I can see your camera bag in the first image too.

Good point....but I am uncertain as to how to address this....more cropping off the bottom? As for that bag....WHOOPS!!

Killakoala wrote:I think the second image could be improved if you crop out the white rock on the left.

I was thinking...I needed someone there standing on that rock projection.....

Thanks for the comments

The second image is the pick of the bunch for me, the first looks flat and lacks colour as mentioned, the last two are overcooked and the stitch banding is evident.

With the second one, reducing the exposure on the white rock and a mild crop may help bring the focus back to the vista rather than the bright white rock.

I was thinking...I needed someone there standing on that rock projection.....

yep, that would be the ticket, just get in a bit closer and it would be a premo composition.