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Fire away, it has to be my turn.

Postby Sylvia on Sat Mar 12, 2011 6:24 pm

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Re: Fire away, it has to be my turn.

Postby Remorhaz on Sun Mar 13, 2011 7:58 am

I think the bird is lovely and well captured, colours are beautiful and the oof background is great. I do however find that oof flower thats so dominant on the right to be very distracting - the bird is looking at it and I think I know where you were going with this but I think it may be too much.
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Re: Fire away, it has to be my turn.

Postby gstark on Sun Mar 13, 2011 9:14 am

I echo what Rodney has said.

The question is, how to address this, if, of course, the OOF flower is an issue for you. I'm thinking a square crop; perhaps crop out a little more than half of the flower, and see where that takes you.

Perhaps also a selective desat, but I'm not sure if that will work.
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Re: Fire away, it has to be my turn.

Postby Sylvia on Sun Mar 13, 2011 9:25 am

Yep,
And thanks guys, I agree but wanted to hear it from others, The flower dominates the image, which was my thoughts exactly. It just helps confirm, even oof its got 50-% of the viewable area but it just distracts too much for me.

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Postby zafra52 on Sun Mar 13, 2011 10:37 am

of course, the OOF flower is an issue for you. I'm thinking a square crop; perhaps crop out a little more than half of the flower,


I agree with gstark, but I would also consider allowing more space between the bird and the edge - if you can.
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Re: Fire away, it has to be my turn.

Postby biggerry on Sun Mar 13, 2011 9:00 pm

yep, stands out like dog ....

easy fix imo though, just crop the bird to 6*4 portrait, looks very nic ethen.
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Re: Fire away, it has to be my turn.

Postby Sylvia on Sun Mar 13, 2011 10:31 pm

Yep, and thanks guys,
What about this one. I just can't decide. Its another angle to consider or do you think the flower still distracts too much?
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Re: Fire away, it has to be my turn.

Postby DebT on Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:17 am

I'd recommend sticking with the 1st but crop to poitrait orientation including only a 1/3 of the grevillia making the bird the feature , in the 2nd I just keep looking at the OOF grevillia in the middle
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Re: Fire away, it has to be my turn.

Postby zafra52 on Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:10 pm

I'd recommend sticking with the 1st but crop to poitrait orientation including only a 1/3


I second this. Now, the second would have worked for me without the flower.
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Re: Fire away, it has to be my turn.

Postby Remorhaz on Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:40 pm

zafra52 wrote:
I'd recommend sticking with the 1st but crop to poitrait orientation including only a 1/3


I second this. Now, the second would have worked for me without the flower.


Yep - just clone out all the flower and leaves there!!!! :twisted: :surrender:
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Re: Fire away, it has to be my turn.

Postby ozimax on Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:53 pm

I have photographed these noisy fellas for years. Your photo is sensational; sharp, bright but yes, I would erase the OOF flower too.

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Re: Fire away, it has to be my turn.

Postby surenj on Mon Mar 14, 2011 11:22 pm

Do you have any pics with both the flower and bird in focus?
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Re: Fire away, it has to be my turn.

Postby Sylvia on Tue Mar 15, 2011 8:59 am

Thanks for the comments. I'd like to crop the ones above but I think it will ruin the clarity and aspect.
I have other captures like this one which are large crops already.

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My favorite is this one. Not much bird but I like the "peek a boo" aspect.

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Re: Fire away, it has to be my turn.

Postby DebT on Tue Mar 15, 2011 2:43 pm

think both of the later two are superior shots. The frst uses the OOF forgroung to frame the bird, the second has a sensational background - sharp as birds well done !
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