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Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 10:12 pm
by surenj
I spotted these reflections during the day and decided to head out at sunset. It is difficult to imagine that this sort of vista is present within the city limits!

C&C appreciated.


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Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 10:41 pm
by bigsarg7
Excellent find! I like it, although I tend to want to see a little more at the top. But that might be just me, i tend to spend more time looking at the bottom trying to see what was at the top.

Love the colors you've captured and the reflections are just fantastic, o and the green stuff looks interesting too....just a different type of green stuff to what we usually see on here!! :rotfl2:

Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 12:34 am
by Big V
Really effective...nice find.

Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 2:39 pm
by biggerry
nice one Suren!

critique?

1) the 'horizon' feels alittle off, this is purely perspective since the ground is level, however when I look at it it feels like it need to be tilted to the right (CW) a fraction, probably only 0.5degree.

2) Symmetry, this is a preference thing, I like symmetry, hence I reckon symmetry about teh horizon would be sweet.

3) The top portion of the image feels a bit bright, maybe just tone it down a fraction.

However these are all minor tweaks, at the end of teh day you have seen and captured a very nice composition and thats 90% of the battle :up: :up:

Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 3:18 pm
by ozimax
Suren, this is an incredible photo. You have nailed it, (whatever "it" is). Perfectly framed. I would hang this one somewhere.

Ozi.

Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 3:32 pm
by Reschsmooth
biggerry wrote:2) Symmetry, this is a preference thing, I like symmetry, hence I reckon symmetry about teh horizon would be sweet.


I do agree with Gerry here, but it is an exceptional photo and opportunity taken well advantage of.

Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 5:21 pm
by glamy
Once again would suggest trying a vertical that would let see more of the top. Nice find and good work.

Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 5:41 pm
by Matt. K
Nice image Suren! I would have liked to have seen a second image where you have thrown a stone into the water so that we could see concentric ripples...just for something different. but a lovely image nevertheless!

Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 7:46 pm
by Remorhaz
Very nice - I actually like it with more water (reflection) than real :)

Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 10:07 pm
by surenj
Thanks everyone for their comments.

Here is a few more versions etc to humour y'all.

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bigsarg7 wrote:little more at the top

glamy wrote: vertical that would let see more of the top

There were bright highlights of the sky which tended to burn out so I cropped it out a little.

Matt. K wrote: thrown a stone into the water

AH! Slaps head!! I was in a long exposure mode and didn't think of this trick!

biggerry wrote:2) Symmetry, this is a preference thing

Reschsmooth wrote:I do agree with Gerry here

Done with an image above.

Lastly, Gerry, I have been using the in-built level and getting pretty close to horizontal. I did discover that my monitor last year was at an angle affecting some of the horizons.

Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 7:12 am
by Remorhaz
Like the monochrome and the symmetric, the last square crop not so much :)

I've also been using the D7000's inbuilt level quite a bit (I've programmed it as the top item in My Menu and assigned that to my function button).

Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 9:53 am
by bigsarg7
I like the #2 in your second series of images! Very nice, just a bit more balanced, but thats my personal preference, I think you should go back and try again and do the rock idea!! :)

Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Wed Mar 23, 2011 10:41 am
by surenj
Thanks guys.

I am warming to the symmetry quite a bit.

Rod, my inbuilt level takes two presses of the info button so it's relatively convenient. Since I don't have a dedicated WB button (Damn you Canon :evil: ), I had to program that to the SET button so don't have any custom buttons left. I find that the in built level is still not perfect. It gets you very very close though.

Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Wed Mar 23, 2011 8:49 pm
by biggerry
surenj wrote:Thanks guys.

I am warming to the symmetry quite a bit.

Rod, my inbuilt level takes two presses of the info button so it's relatively convenient. Since I don't have a dedicated WB button (Damn you Canon :evil: ), I had to program that to the SET button so don't have any custom buttons left. I find that the in built level is still not perfect. It gets you very very close though.


the reworked 2nd image rocks my boat :up: you will have to send me a tiff of this one day and I would love to have a go at processing it... there are heaps of options. Even better, thats a good image for PP session :wink: btw, the BW version does not work for me.

Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:00 pm
by surenj
biggerry wrote: you will have to send me a tiff of this one day and I would love to have a go at processing it

I would be embarassed to show off my noise machine output... :oops: Anywhoo... check email.

Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Sat Mar 26, 2011 12:03 pm
by Geoff M
I agree that the 2nd reworked image is the pick of the bunch for me. Nicely composed and exposed image.

Difficult to believe that it is in the city!

Re: Tranquility in Centennial Park

PostPosted: Sat Mar 26, 2011 7:16 pm
by biggerry
surenj wrote:I would be embarassed to show off my noise machine output... Anywhoo... check email.


heres my crack..

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