Apoclyptic sunset

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Apoclyptic sunset

Postby aim54x on Tue May 10, 2011 10:55 pm

Over the weekend I finally managed to make a half arsed effort to put my new B+W big stopper into use. When combined with Cokin grads....and the right white balance you can create a VERY red sunset.

S5 Pro + Voigtlander Color Skopar 20mm f/3.5 SL II
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and again with a slight under exposure
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and without the big stopper

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Re: Apoclyptic sunset

Postby colin_12 on Tue May 10, 2011 11:59 pm

Interesting effects Cameron. Don't know if I like quite this much red though.
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Re: Apoclyptic sunset

Postby surenj on Wed May 11, 2011 1:14 am

Interesting stuff Cameron. The difference with and without the Bigstoppa is not that obvious in these pictures (save the color cast).

I find that I need to reduce 1000K if I use the stoppa. Also I've noticed that there has been the odd purple cast. [Bloody Canon sensors.... Wish I could install a D7000 sensor+algorithm into my camera]
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Re: Apoclyptic sunset

Postby Reschsmooth on Wed May 11, 2011 7:44 am

I don't mind the red cast but the colour range is reduced considerably which makes the image less impressive than the third.

I also think a judicial crop from the bottom in the first two is warranted.
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Re: Apoclyptic sunset

Postby Remorhaz on Wed May 11, 2011 11:29 am

surenj wrote:I find that I need to reduce 1000K if I use the stoppa. Also I've noticed that there has been the odd purple cast. [Bloody Canon sensors.... Wish I could install a D7000 sensor+algorithm into my camera]


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Re: Apoclyptic sunset

Postby biggerry on Thu May 12, 2011 10:02 pm

I reckon this location and concept is a good idea with teh bigstopper, however on this particular day there was not much wind, with a stiff breeze you would get some really nice effects with the clouds which would compliment the SOH nicely. Its obviously a good time of year too since the sun is positioned perfectly behind the SOH.

Reschsmooth wrote:I also think a judicial crop from the bottom in the first two is warranted.


yep, agreed.

I think at the end of the day sometimes you need to take yourself away from the complete reality of a scene and try stuff like this - some of teh great photos are not direct representations of reality but often contrived scenes manipulated in a way to suit the desired end result.

With a title of 'Apoclyptic sunset' i think it works well - I could not resist and have a crack at the image cameron - i think it could work on a number of levels...

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Re: Apoclyptic sunset

Postby biggerry on Thu May 12, 2011 10:03 pm

Also, cam, I reckon you need to introduce some sharpening into your web downsized images :up:
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Re: Apoclyptic sunset

Postby aim54x on Thu May 12, 2011 10:10 pm

Thanks guys, I am considering heading out there again, probably on Saturday...with tripod and big stopper and other bits and pieces (especially batteries!!).

Gerry, I like the crop + rework, but I think more crimson and less pink is needed....but it is very promising. As for sharpening....what is that? :oops: I have never actually sharpened anything other than the in camera sharpening (hence I have never "over sharpened") but yes I have noticed that the forum view seems to fuzz images a bit (must reduce the resize template a bit).
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