Waterfall in B+W

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Waterfall in B+W

Postby Willy wombat on Tue Aug 23, 2011 12:11 am

I have had pneumonia these past few weeks and I dragged myself out of bed today and sat down to dig through some photo archives.

Found this one and decided it leant itself to a high contrast B+W treatment.

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Re: Waterfall in B+W

Postby PiroStitch on Tue Aug 23, 2011 12:27 am

Glad to hear you're better.

Love the b&w treatment - the tones of the water and ferns are great!
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Re: Waterfall in B+W

Postby aim54x on Tue Aug 23, 2011 12:40 am

Nicely done....I think I will have to get out there with tripod and film.....
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Re: Waterfall in B+W

Postby Remorhaz on Tue Aug 23, 2011 8:20 am

PiroStitch wrote:Glad to hear you're better.

Love the b&w treatment - the tones of the water and ferns are great!


Agreed (on both counts) - the light is great. One miniscule nitpick - that oof fern on the middle left is perhaps a tiny distracting?
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Re: Waterfall in B+W

Postby robert on Tue Aug 23, 2011 10:31 am

I like how youve kept the fringes quite dark and not lightened them up- i tend to try and even out the exposure on everything and youve given me some inspiriation not to have it all look as if it was daylight even in the shadows! PS where is this?
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Re: Waterfall in B+W

Postby Murray Foote on Tue Aug 23, 2011 6:32 pm

Very nice. It conjures up the image of walking along a creek through thick bush and suddenly you come to this ....
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Re: Waterfall in B+W

Postby Willy wombat on Tue Aug 23, 2011 6:48 pm

Hi guys - thanks for the feedback on this image

The waterfalls are the Hopetoun falls. Quite famous down here in Victoria.
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Re: Waterfall in B+W

Postby zafra52 on Tue Aug 23, 2011 9:28 pm

It very nice, but my eyes expect colours... :(
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