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Stairs

PostPosted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 5:13 pm
by CraigVTR
Shot from the top of the stairwell at the Arc de Triomphe, Paris. Handheld, while breathing hard, after I had just climbed to the top via some 270 steps.

D300 24-7- at 24mm f2.8 125sec 3200iso

Does the cropped shot work better?

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Re: Stairs

PostPosted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 7:49 pm
by biggerry
CraigVTR wrote:Does the cropped shot work better?


yes, but you need to move the origin of the crop to teh right a bit imo, the reason being to maintain that curve on the right hand side.

Processing wise, I like this desaturated slightly warm shot (possibly due to the high iso) and would even consider pushing this style even further, ie more contrast and less saturation.

Re: Stairs

PostPosted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 8:35 pm
by NeoTiger
Love this shot, the cropped one does work better.

I probably would've liked to see a slower shutter speed to see more motion blurring of the walking people, but not sure how difficult that handheld shot would be.

Re: Stairs

PostPosted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 10:14 pm
by aim54x
I am undecided about which is better. But I would definitely explore a contrasty monochrome conversion

Re: Stairs

PostPosted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 11:25 am
by CraigVTR
Thanks guys. I will try your different suggestions and repost.

Re: Stairs

PostPosted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 6:42 pm
by CraigVTR
NeoTiger wrote:Love this shot, the cropped one does work better.
I probably would've liked to see a slower shutter speed to see more motion blurring of the walking people, but not sure how difficult that handheld shot would be.


Thanks. Tried a slower speed but could not get a steady shot.

biggerry wrote:
CraigVTR wrote:Does the cropped shot work better?

yes, but you need to move the origin of the crop to teh right a bit imo, the reason being to maintain that curve on the right hand side.


Balanced up the crop, but it is now not square.
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aim54x wrote:I am undecided about which is better. But I would definitely explore a contrasty monochrome conversion

How does this one look?
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Re: Stairs

PostPosted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 9:54 pm
by aim54x
this crop works well. I am not currently on a calibrated screen but the black and white does look promising