Cordeaux Dam
Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 9:40 pm
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Mr Darcy wrote:#1 I think there is too much dark space around your window. While using a window frame to frame a view can work brilliantly, I don't think you have hit the mark here. You need something in the surrounds to give it interest. Otherwise you may as well crop. I would go to just barely outside the outer ochre edge. Get just a little bit of the black. I also get the feeling the whole picture needs to be straightened ever so slightly. It gives me the feeling that the it is sliding to the right.
#2,3,4 I can't really comment on these as I have zero experience in this field, but #3 is the only one that works for me. But then I am partial to panos.
Remorhaz wrote:#1 - as it happens exactly what Greg said
of the other three I like the first (and then the last) but I think you could pano crop the bottom and clone out what remains of the bush at the bottom right. NB: other than the tree (and not even it enough) the image doesn't "look" like one of those other world IR's to me - it looks more like a monochrome conversion if you know what I mean...
surenj wrote:Just to add to the others.
#1 I don't think the subjectthrough the window is very interesting/ has nice light/ or very discernible etc. Good concept though.
#4 Neat stuff indeed. Get rid of the blown highlights though. To balance this composition, I reckon you need a small element in the left lower...perhaps a little plant in the foregorund to frame the image and keep the viewer interested and centred.
Could I ask what brought you to this location? It looks like it's in the middle of no where. Are there any interesting areas nearby??
biggerry wrote:I reckon with that last pano (s) a tidy crop to remove the boring 30% on the left would go a long way to making this a much stronger composition.