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Birdies

PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 8:47 pm
by chrisk
d700/ 300VR
I really like the spoonbill shot, a tough exposure and its bang on i reckon. well done nikon. :cheers:

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Untitled by .Chris.K, on Flickr

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Untitled by .Chris.K, on Flickr

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Untitled by .Chris.K, on Flickr

Re: Birdies

PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 9:08 pm
by Geoff M
Well done Chris, I say.

Love the first, exposure, composition, and lighting are perfection.

The spoonbill is very well exposed and framed, but I would like to have seen more DOF to ensure the bill was in focus.

The finches, again more depth of field required to have both of the birds in focus.

Re: Birdies

PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 9:53 pm
by the foto fanatic
#1 = WOW!

Birdies

PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 10:36 pm
by chrisk
Geoff M wrote:Well done Chris, I say.

Love the first, exposure, composition, and lighting are perfection.

The spoonbill is very well exposed and framed, but I would like to have seen more DOF to ensure the bill was in focus.

The finches, again more depth of field required to have both of the birds in focus.


Thanks. the spoonbill indeed needs more dof, i could have easily done it too cos there was bugger all in the background. Put it down to a silly mistake. With the finches, that was intentional to defocus the other bird. Reflecting on it, i think you may be right again and shouldve stopped down.

Re: Birdies

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 12:29 am
by PiroStitch
Love the composition and tones in the first one. Not sure that you needed the extra DOF in the third one however as I prefer having one bird being the primary and the other as a secondary subject.

Re: Birdies

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 8:45 am
by aim54x
Exposure on these are spot on and the colours are wonderful!

I think DOF has been covered so I wont reiterate. I have to find the time to get out to the zoo again

Re: Birdies

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 11:39 am
by Jenno
#1 superb
Now just loose the wedding ring and it will be perfecto

Re: Birdies

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 1:15 pm
by Reschsmooth
Jenno wrote:#1 superb
Now just loose the wedding ring and it will be perfecto


Know a good bird family lawyer? :D

As others have said, exposure and colours are great, DOF in the last two detract a little.

Re: Birdies

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 4:46 pm
by chrisk
Jenno wrote:#1 superb
Now just loose the wedding ring and it will be perfecto


i did try and clone that thing out but unfortunately it exceeds my PP capability threshold. lol

Re: Birdies

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 5:02 pm
by radar
Rooz wrote:
Jenno wrote:#1 superb
Now just loose the wedding ring and it will be perfecto


i did try and clone that thing out but unfortunately it exceeds my PP capability threshold. lol


content-aware fill and proximity match with a small brush size will get you pretty close, that's in CS5. In NX2, the eraser brush will also do a pretty good job.

The first one is great.

On the last one, not sure you would have been able to stop down enough to really get the second one in focus. It would depend on how far they were from you. I like the separation you got between the two finches.

Re: Birdies

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 5:47 pm
by Steffen
I reckon the OOF finch acts nicely as visual counter-weight to the sharp one, without confusing the eye as to what the main subject is. I do agree though that the duck bill needs more DOF, ideally from the feathers on the back of the head to the tip of the bill. It looks as though there wasn't much light to work with.

The standout is number 1 for me, too.

Cheers
Steffen.

Re: Birdies

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 8:12 pm
by Bob G
Killer combination for birds and you have done the kit justice with these.

Re: Birdies

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 10:13 pm
by Jenno
Look mum ..no ring :D

Mainly used the clone tool..no perfect but think its better..

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Re: Birdies

PostPosted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 3:52 pm
by norwest
Agree with the comments re the first. Lovely bokeh and sharp as a tack.

Re: Birdies

PostPosted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 6:57 pm
by chrisk
Jenno wrote:Look mum ..no ring :D

Mainly used the clone tool..no perfect but think its better..


awesome job, is that with photoshop ?

Re: Birdies

PostPosted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 8:00 pm
by Jenno
awesome job, is that with photoshop


Yep
As suggested, mainly used the clone tool. Tried the content aware fill but wasn't happy with the result

Re: Birdies

PostPosted: Fri Dec 09, 2011 8:28 pm
by biggerry
Thats an absolutely terrible lens, hence you better sell it to me for a silly cheap price...

great shots Chris, whilst I reckon you need to learn the art of cloning I think leaving the rings on is actually a important part of the image, i imagine the hardcore birders may get a bit narky about that kind of thing. For me the rings do not really detract, merely confirm they are birds in capivity, non issue.