Not quite star trails

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Not quite star trails

Postby colin_12 on Sun Jan 22, 2012 10:36 am

Well we did not get to see any stars, but the company was great as always. :up:

We did however have a bit of a play with orbs and the like.......

Something fairly standard
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A pregnat orb
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Alien.....
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Re: Not quite star trails

Postby zafra52 on Sun Jan 22, 2012 11:49 am

Very clever, I like best the 1st and 2nd.
They remind me of cotton balls
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Re: Not quite star trails

Postby biggerry on Sun Jan 22, 2012 11:53 pm

I like the last one Colin, the crop and placement work well.
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Re: Not quite star trails

Postby the foto fanatic on Mon Jan 23, 2012 6:39 am

Very good - #1 especially!
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Re: Not quite star trails

Postby CraigVTR on Mon Jan 23, 2012 8:26 am

I like the last, very tight and alien.
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Re: Not quite star trails

Postby colin_12 on Mon Jan 23, 2012 6:33 pm

Thanks fellas,
We had a good time trying different stuff out og Gerry's bag of tricks.
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Re: Not quite star trails

Postby biggerry on Mon Jan 23, 2012 7:32 pm

colin_12 wrote:We had a good time trying different stuff out og Gerry's bag of tricks.


wish I brought the swivel doovy adapter thingabob for the domes...

they are meant to look like this...

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Re: Not quite star trails

Postby zafra52 on Mon Jan 23, 2012 9:29 pm

biggerry, that is too sofisticate...
and too down to earth...
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Re: Not quite star trails

Postby surenj on Tue Jan 24, 2012 5:02 pm

Colin, the last one is nice and tidy I reckon.
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