thanks for the feedback guys, i needed to mull over these a bit before responding...
Mj wrote:I think all of these suffer from a scale and composition problem.
Nothing wrong exposure and lighting wise but for this sort of image I believe you'd need to be up much higher (which of course might not be that easy) and get a shot taking in much more of the entire plane. Tricky stuff really. The tug work well though.
hmm, a higher point of view would be good.. one problem at this location is hat there is alot of clutter around so it is a matter of trying to isolate the subject somewhat...i do hear what you are saying though.
surenj wrote:Hi Gerry,
The paint on these made it tricky to light I think. I think a metallic car is much easier because it gets this intrinsic glow but these seem to just look flat. The other issue is that we can't get above it which adds to the 2D effect.
you may well be right there, whilst the paintwork is new and clean it did come across very flat...
surenj wrote:#1 Tricky one to compose. I think I'd go for a more 3D look.
#2 is my favourite from this lot. I reckon you can shave off a little from below. I think the tug leads to the plane nicely.
#3 Perhaps get rid of the background lights? Nice detail on the engine.
#4 Nice and even which shows the Tug quite nicely. Nice touch with the light on top.
#2 is also my favorite... i think it was good that the tug was there, added a bit of colour, depth and interest to the scene..
I believe the torch on the orange light was indeed you idea, so - nicely done to you
surenj wrote:I don't have a technical knowledge of the area so I am sure I am missing stuff on those engines, landing gear etc. My comments are just to improve the pictures technically; not for technical pictures. Infact, I didn't even know the name of the aircraft until you posted it!
PS: They seem to be behind on the naming of these things as well as the tech. Albatross sounds so mellow and fat.
thats cool, we all take pictures with different visions on mind, none are more valid than others in my opinion just a different take.
Albatross, well it is a pretty fat slow plane so i think it could be appropriate - they do have weird names for aircraft though...
Remorhaz wrote:I'm not exactly sure but I think it's a combination of being too evenly lit making everything look sort of normal and flat and also the composition/angles.
The first for instance is just straight on the side and all brightly lit. The idea of backlighting sounds like it has merit as I think would leaving some parts of the plane in shadow and graduating the light.
Whilst #3 is down low and kind of close with the wide I'm feeling like none of the plane is actually close but I'm not sure how I'd introduce some foreground perspective to make it more 3D - it's like I'd need to be close to that prop/engine to do it.
In #2 perhaps a little closer to the tug and a little to the left (so I can see a little more of the front/body of the plane), or even a shot from on top of the roof of the tug looking straight down the nose of the plane - as close and wide as you can - no idea how you'd light it tho.
possibly working with less rather than more might have been better here - i do like the idea of the view from up on teh tug - that would have been cool.
I do find with teh UWA you have to work a bit harder to nail the composition since things (even big things) can get lost in teh frame). Possibly using a longer lens 30+mm on #2 may have been more pleasing...
cheers for the feedback, appreciated...