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Turimetta Beach

Postby rangie on Wed May 16, 2012 9:25 am

Here is another image from my Turimetta Sunrise Series. Tell me what you think.

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Turimetta by Ben Fewtrell, on Flickr
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Re: Turimetta Beach

Postby biggerry on Wed May 16, 2012 12:47 pm

rangie wrote:Tell me what you think.


its OK, a little wider tt give more of a sense of space and correction of the HDR chromatic aberrations around teh rock (only visible on a the larger version) would work better for me.

Also, try and apply a small amount of large radius sharpening, you will find teh HDR process often leaves images a bit soft and requiring a bit more than your standard web resize sharpening
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Re: Turimetta Beach

Postby Geoff M on Wed May 16, 2012 9:37 pm

WB is too warm for my liking and too tight in the frame (both sides and bottom), otherwise a very nice image.
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