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One of the better photos I took last Monday



Unfortunately my computer crashed so I am
working with very limited computer resources.

Hey there... a couple of thoughts...

I would look at cropping both top and bottom to have her fill the frame more but leave the negative space to the left.
Then reduce the exposure of the clothing at the lap as it is taking the focus from the primary subject. I would also consider removing her legs . The shadowline around the ribbon is a bit strong given the rest of the shot but that might be difficult to adjust. Of course... feel free to disagree with any of the above.

Big, bold image with a lot of power. I agree with MJ that I think I would clone the legs out of the image to give the appearence that she is standing. It looks a little awkward as it is. It would also work well as a black and white.

Zafra, is this a model shoot?? or candid?