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Warbirds

Postby the foto fanatic on Sun May 06, 2012 7:45 am

Yesterday in Brisbane there was a ceremony to mark the 70th anniversary of the Battle of the Coral Sea. Dignitaries from Australia and the USA spoke, there was a battle of the bands between the RAN and USN, and finally there was a flyover of two aeroplanes from the era.

Apparently the US plane on the left is a T-6 Texan, and the one on the right is an Australian Wirraway. The Wirraway was built here to the same specs as the T-6. They certainly look like they came from the same litter, don't they?

I'm happy with the image except that the shutter speed was a tad too fast - I would have liked those props to be spinning rather than just slightly blurred.

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Re: Warbirds

Postby Remorhaz on Sun May 06, 2012 10:06 am

Yep - nice image and agree about the props but I don't think I'd subtract too many points for that :) Only 130mm on FX - they must have been quite low?
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Postby the foto fanatic on Sun May 06, 2012 10:32 am

Remorhaz wrote:Yep - nice image and agree about the props but I don't think I'd subtract too many points for that :) Only 130mm on FX - they must have been quite low?


Yes Rodney - well detected!

They did three passes at 500 feet. Quite a sight.
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Re: Warbirds

Postby biggerry on Mon May 07, 2012 10:38 pm

Nice stuff Trevor, good compo with teh placement of the aircraft within the frame, nice angle showing teh underside, i lie it - perhaps a tighter crop? has it been cropped at all yet?

Regards shutter, better to have a usuable shot than none at all - if you have time practice for the 1/160 speed but otherwise, imo, nail it.

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Re: Warbirds

Postby the foto fanatic on Mon May 07, 2012 11:23 pm

biggerry wrote:Nice stuff Trevor, good compo with teh placement of the aircraft within the frame, nice angle showing teh underside, i lie it - perhaps a tighter crop? has it been cropped at all yet?

Regards shutter, better to have a usuable shot than none at all - if you have time practice for the 1/160 speed but otherwise, imo, nail it.

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Thanks Gerry.

Yes, the Harvard is from the same family.

The image has been cropped slightly. I resisted the urge to crop more because of the lack of motion. If the props were a circular blur, I probably would have cropped more because it is obvious to the viewer that the planes are in motion. With only having a slight blur, I felt that I wanted a bit more space around them so that you could tell they were actually flying.
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Re: Warbirds

Postby biggerry on Mon May 07, 2012 11:41 pm

the foto fanatic wrote:The image has been cropped slightly. I resisted the urge to crop more because of the lack of motion. If the props were a circular blur, I probably would have cropped more because it is obvious to the viewer that the planes are in motion. With only having a slight blur, I felt that I wanted a bit more space around them so that you could tell they were actually flying.


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