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A new directionHey everyone, I haven't been in for ages (sorry about that ), but have started to learn to shoot things other than frogs and dragonflies
Here a couple - please be gentle The first is a friends 4 week old little girl - never shot a baby before, but it was fun The second was a try at a 'trash the dress' style shoot while on a workshop - the model was finished and I asked her if she was game - she immediately said yes, and then asked me what trash the dress meant This was definitely fun Oh well, here goes .... Dodging and burning are steps to take care of mistakes God made in establishing tonal relationships! -Ansel Adams
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Re: A new directionHi Narelle - the baby is nice and I like the triptych (the colour palette is good and I like the mostly light background for the first but all coloured for top right)
The second for me is too devoid of all detail on the skin. The soft (100% negative clarity) look seems fine on the boby shots but on the model it just looks too airbrushed and fake. Compositionally I'm ok with the rest of the shot - I'd crop the dark area from across the bottom. D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
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Re: A new directionGee Rel, When I read the thread title and saw the first image my first thought was ,Rel's had a baby But then I read on
A far cry from your usual signature stuff, but as usual, you haave excelled. The baby shot(s) is nicely exposed and composed - very sweet. The trash the dress shot I like with the dramatic lighting but I can't help thinking a landscape orientated image would be better suited. Fuji X-Pro1 | X-E1 | X-T1 | XF14 | XF23 | XF27 | XF35 | XF56 | XF60 | XF10-24 | XF18-55 | XF55-200 | MCEX-11
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Re: A new directionthanks guys Definitely haven't had a baby LOL
This is a shot that was processed much 'softer' and is landscape - actually, I think my horizon is a little crooked and it still has the rowers in the background, but see what you think .... Dodging and burning are steps to take care of mistakes God made in establishing tonal relationships! -Ansel Adams
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Re: A new directionHi Rel.
Great to see you here again.
You should be using a cannon, not a Canon. The baby with the roses/headband does nothing for me. Otherwise, the other two shots are very good. I love the trash-the-dress shot. I like the negative space that the portrait orientation gives the image, and the darker section at the bottom adds a sense of depth. The lighting adds drama, and the composition is excellent. I have no issues with the post that you've applied either; you seem to be wanting have a certain feel to the image, and I think you've achieved that very well. g.
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Re: A new directionGreat to hear from you...and these are some great images. I love the "trash the dress" shots!
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Re: A new directionGood to see you are still shooting Rel. Love both shots especially the bub, I prefer the first dress shot but think it would be better if the outer/bottom edge of the dress was included.
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Re: A new directionI just love those weirdly beautiful images that you've put up. Delightful!
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Re: A new directionThe pictures of the baby look a bit over exposed
on my screen. I like the pose. The abandoned bride looks a bit too dark, but it is an interesting look.
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