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Flamingo

PostPosted: Sun Jul 22, 2012 10:10 pm
by DanielA
I've never taken a good shot of the flamingo at the Adelaide Zoo so i'm fairly happy with these, but I'm wondering if they are a bit much. I have crushed the blacks to fix the background, but that means I loose parts of the wings and beak. Thoughts?

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The second image embedded here is a png as the jpeg's background went a bit strange (follow the link to see the jpeg).

Daniel

Re: Flamingo

PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2012 6:42 pm
by zafra52
The birds look suspended on air. I think you
possibly overdid th black background.

Re: Flamingo

PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2012 9:17 pm
by aim54x
:agree:

Re: Flamingo

PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2012 10:06 pm
by DanielA
Fair enough.

You can't really tone it back without getting the horrible green water and floating crud.

Thanks

Daniel

Re: Flamingo

PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2012 4:42 pm
by biggerry
I don't mind these, losing the beak is a bit of a showstopper, however possibly just dialling back the black to leave just a fraction of detail may help.

taking them on face value and as presented without any background knowledge my first thought was 'nioce' and for me thats all that really matters. I really love that subtle reflection, had me leaning in for more :)