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One amongst many

PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 10:54 am
by the foto fanatic
Image

Re: One amongst many

PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 11:48 am
by Matt. K
That's what it's all about! Just beautiful.

Re: One amongst many

PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 12:38 pm
by aim54x
Very nice work there Trevor!

Re: One amongst many

PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 6:01 pm
by Remorhaz
Hi Trevor - at first I found it a little dark (but I love the softness and feel of the overall image) - it's growing on me though.

Re: One amongst many

PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 6:35 pm
by Reschsmooth
Very nice, except the out of focus Tulip directly behind the front tulip is a little distracting.

Re: One amongst many

PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 7:17 pm
by Matt. K
Patrick
You are right. The image would be improved if it were cloned out.

Re: One amongst many

PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 7:58 pm
by the foto fanatic
Yep -I think that is a valid critique.
Edited to correct.

Re: One amongst many

PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 9:07 pm
by biggerry
Cloning out the centre tulip would off balance the composition imo. The primary subject is on the far right, with a gaping black spot in the middle it would need some more room on the RHS to equal out.

maybe just minimise it by some selective darkening?

Re: One amongst many

PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 9:36 pm
by the foto fanatic
biggerry wrote:Cloning out the centre tulip would off balance the composition imo. The primary subject is on the far right, with a gaping black spot in the middle it would need some more room on the RHS to equal out.

maybe just minimise it by some selective darkening?


The correction has been made already. There was an OOF halo (from another flower directly behind it) around the in-focus bloom. I have cloned it out.

The other blooms are safe!