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Emerging

Postby the foto fanatic on Sun Aug 26, 2012 4:49 pm

I am determined to get my money's worth out of these tulips :)
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Re: Emerging

Postby Matt. K on Sun Aug 26, 2012 7:04 pm

Nicely arranged and the composition works beautifully. I'm wondering if the sky could do with a little darkening...yellow bounces off blue pretty well?
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Re: Emerging

Postby aim54x on Sun Aug 26, 2012 8:40 pm

:agree:

....and you certainly are getting your money's worth!
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Re: Emerging

Postby the foto fanatic on Mon Aug 27, 2012 5:44 pm

Substituted a different sky:
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Re: Emerging

Postby zafra52 on Mon Aug 27, 2012 5:59 pm

I prefer the second because the colours
are more vivid.
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Re: Emerging

Postby the foto fanatic on Mon Aug 27, 2012 9:52 pm

zafra52 wrote:I prefer the second because the colours
are more vivid.

Thanks - the new background makes a big difference.
I shot the same area of sky as in the original image, but today was a much brighter day with blue skies and less cloud.
Then it was a cut and paste job in Photoshop.
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Re: Emerging

Postby Reschsmooth on Mon Aug 27, 2012 9:56 pm

Those yellows really pop in the second. The composition is somewhat 'royal'.
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Re: Emerging

Postby biggerry on Mon Aug 27, 2012 10:01 pm

nioce, i like teh second version.
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