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Cockatoo Art

PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 9:44 pm
by stubbsy
A few weeks back now I had some free time (a rarity at present :( ) and managed to make it to Sydney Biennale at Cockatoo Island. I've finally complete processing my images and have a few below for your comments.

This first one was a wonderful, whimsical (and very popular) installation. For some reason the image on SmugMug is much darker than I see it in Lightroom:

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I had a lot of issues deciding a treatment for the work below. I've now played with this so many times I'm not sure if this is awesome, crap or somewhere in between :?

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Unlike the shot above this one has had minimal processing (principally a B & W conversion)

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Re: Cockatoo Art

PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 10:39 pm
by Matt. K
OK...I'm impressed. The quality of #1 just knocks me out...it's stunning. I like #2 and I think #3 is excellent. Nice to see you back. Question...were you working from a tripod??

Re: Cockatoo Art

PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 11:36 pm
by aim54x
Great to see some images Peter! I like what you have done with #2, I kept looking at different angles and completely neglected the front on shot.

Re: Cockatoo Art

PostPosted: Mon Sep 24, 2012 7:39 am
by CraigVTR
Love all three. I would crop the bottom of number two, to remove the line of the path that cuts through the right lower half of the image.

Re: Cockatoo Art

PostPosted: Fri Sep 28, 2012 7:36 pm
by zafra52
I like all of them precisely in the
same orden they appear.

Re: Cockatoo Art

PostPosted: Fri Sep 28, 2012 9:57 pm
by biggerry
stubbsy wrote:I had a lot of issues deciding a treatment for the work below. I've now played with this so many times I'm not sure if this is awesome, crap or somewhere in between


I look at these a few times Peter and i really do like that second one - the processing is sweet and the desat works nicely, one aspect that would have made it 3 thumbs up would be a slight composition change - I would have liked to have seen the image taken perfectly perpendicular to the wall, at the moment it looks like you are off at a slight angle to the left, additionally a small crop from the bottom so that darker grass frame the image would have been a nice natural vignette to the frame.

Other than that I like the texture in the walls and that vine on the right is awesome.

Re: Cockatoo Art

PostPosted: Mon Oct 01, 2012 12:00 am
by Remorhaz
#1 is very funky cool - I love how it looks

#3 is also very interesting - I love how my mind just can't reconcile the two people and the "shadows" - very intriguing