Seaside Macro...

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Seaside Macro...

Postby Remorhaz on Mon Oct 01, 2012 11:48 am

Took my Tamron 90mm macro for a spin on the beach (sand and all :)) for some up close action at the seaside

Emerging
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Sand Blasted
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Curls
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Finer Intricacies
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Re: Seaside Macro...

Postby Geoff M on Mon Oct 01, 2012 12:58 pm

A very nice set Rodney, altough I think that the orientation of all should be the same to make a 'set' or have two portrait and two landscape. My pick of the four is the fourth, a nice abstract. Exposure would have been challenging on a bright sandy beach.
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Re: Seaside Macro...

Postby biggerry on Mon Oct 01, 2012 3:03 pm

I am liking that first one Rodney, but needs more DOF and I really wanna see that dark thing in focus :)

The last is also nice and i think would suit a long vertical pano crop.
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Re: Seaside Macro...

Postby zafra52 on Mon Oct 01, 2012 3:52 pm

I like them all, but I agree the 1st one
would benefit from more dof to bring
the eye more into focus.
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Re: Seaside Macro...

Postby stubbsy on Mon Oct 01, 2012 5:29 pm

Well for me it's the last image that grabs me. It has the DOF that marrs the others for me and I love the contrast between the sand and the bit of seaweed (or whatever that is)
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Re: Seaside Macro...

Postby Remorhaz on Mon Oct 01, 2012 5:37 pm

Geoff M wrote:A very nice set Rodney, altough I think that the orientation of all should be the same to make a 'set' or have two portrait and two landscape. My pick of the four is the fourth, a nice abstract. Exposure would have been challenging on a bright sandy beach.


Thanks Geoff - I shot all of these at -2/3rds of a stop and was all good. Unfortunately I didn't take a landscape version of the last (although I could probably crop one) - I might try a quadriptych and see how it looks - thanks.

biggerry wrote:I am liking that first one Rodney, but needs more DOF and I really wanna see that dark thing in focus :)

zafra52 wrote:I like them all, but I agree the 1st one would benefit from more dof to bring the eye more into focus.


The dead (and pretty much empty) crab shell in the sand (NB I didn't set this up - this is as found :)) - the dark thing was the eye - I did have a couple of shots at f/16 but even still the eye isn't really in the DoF and it makes the rest of the scene "messy" to my eye.

... I've edited one of the f/16 shots and cloned out the distracting crap in the background - thoughts?

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biggerry wrote:The last is also nice and i think would suit a long vertical pano crop.


Thanks for the vertical pano crop idea with the last :up:
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Re: Seaside Macro...

Postby zafra52 on Mon Oct 01, 2012 5:44 pm

I think this last crab image is much better.
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Re: Seaside Macro...

Postby aim54x on Tue Oct 02, 2012 9:25 am

Very brave man, getting so close to the sand with that 90mm! The last image (of the first set) is the standout!
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Re: Seaside Macro...

Postby Remorhaz on Tue Oct 02, 2012 10:07 am

stubbsy wrote:Well for me it's the last image that grabs me. It has the DOF that marrs the others for me and I love the contrast between the sand and the bit of seaweed (or whatever that is)


Peter - I'm not sure what the thing was - it was quite hard (and about 10cm tall) so perhaps it was the skeletal structure of coral or something? Thanks for the feedback - I need to restrain myself from going for shallow DoF.

zafra52 wrote:I think this last crab image is much better.


Thanks Zafra - I'm coming around to it too :)

aim54x wrote:Very brave man, getting so close to the sand with that 90mm! The last image (of the first set) is the standout!


Thanks Cam and the lens seems to have survived - it was a little scratchy there for a bit until I blew some grains of sand out of the focus ring with the rocket blower :)
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Re: Seaside Macro...

Postby ATJ on Tue Oct 02, 2012 10:56 am

For me, the crab would have been a much stronger image if the eye was sharp (even if the crab was dead). We tend to forgive unsharpness in other areas if at least one eye is sharp.
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Re: Seaside Macro...

Postby Remorhaz on Tue Oct 02, 2012 8:45 pm

ATJ wrote:For me, the crab would have been a much stronger image if the eye was sharp (even if the crab was dead). We tend to forgive unsharpness in other areas if at least one eye is sharp.


I hear you :)

No good now anyway - my daughter pretty much destroyed it soon after this
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Seaside Macro...

Postby chrisk on Tue Oct 02, 2012 11:02 pm

Delete the eye.
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Re: Seaside Macro...

Postby Remorhaz on Wed Oct 03, 2012 4:27 pm

Rooz wrote:Delete the eye.


Now theres a thought... after a little eye clonage...

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Seaside Macro...

Postby chrisk on Wed Oct 03, 2012 7:26 pm

Much better.
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