Hunter Valley in Colour

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Hunter Valley in Colour

Postby Reschsmooth on Wed Oct 10, 2012 9:06 pm

I got my slides back today. Unfortunately, I had slightly overexposed and lost some of the golden colour. That said, I am not too dissatisfied with them.

Interested in comments viz the B&W ones recently posted. I think this shows that the slides have significantly less dynamic range than the B&W film as seen in the shadows of the first one.

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Re: Hunter Valley in Colour

Postby biggerry on Thu Oct 11, 2012 8:54 am

I think the first works in terms of colour and the less dynamic range and blown sky help give it a light and airy feeling - I think the image (colour version) definitely needs to be cropped, the really dark shadow areas create too much of a jarring transition within the frame conflicting with the light and airy feeling. I think using that dark area as a border/frame to the main part of image would work heaps better imo - ie crop from the bottom and right only.
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Re: Hunter Valley in Colour

Postby aim54x on Thu Oct 11, 2012 8:56 am

I am with Gerry, the first image does really well with the addition of colour!
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Re: Hunter Valley in Colour

Postby Remorhaz on Thu Oct 11, 2012 4:29 pm

aim54x wrote:I am with Gerry, the first image does really well with the addition of colour!


+1 for me too :)
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Re: Hunter Valley in Colour

Postby Reschsmooth on Thu Oct 11, 2012 5:24 pm

biggerry wrote:I think the first works in terms of colour and the less dynamic range and blown sky help give it a light and airy feeling - I think the image (colour version) definitely needs to be cropped, the really dark shadow areas create too much of a jarring transition within the frame conflicting with the light and airy feeling. I think using that dark area as a border/frame to the main part of image would work heaps better imo - ie crop from the bottom and right only.



I think you are right, Gerry - the shadows dominate too much and wreck the mood of the image. However, I cropped it this way because of the way the chair was facing. I may try some work on the shadows in a semi-HDR fashion.
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