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Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 LightpaintingI have been caught out.....here are those fishy images that Rodney was asking about
Wide but not fishy Last edited by aim54x on Tue Nov 06, 2012 11:36 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Cameron
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Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 LightpaintingWow - with that first I was thinking you'd taken it from the same side as I did but more to the left to include the moon, then wondered why there was the red/yellow EL in front of the dome (I didn't remember any being done outside the dome there) and then saw the path on the right - then it hit me - OMG you've got the moon in and the dome from the moon side - the dome looks pretty undistorted too
I think with #2 you need to rotate a bit to the left so it isn't falling over #3 is very wide With #4 maybe you clone out the star and crop the bottom 25% off D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
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Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 LightpaintingHey Cam, good to see some images form teh night, I like teh last the best. I think they all need a bit of straightening and the first few a bit of love in the processing department just to clean things up.
Have you thought about a black border for your images rather than a white one? I think alot of your images could look better on a black border rather than a white one. Thanks for coming out on the night. gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 Lightpainting
Thanks...after I get home tonight I will address these....esp #2 and #4 Cameron
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Thanks Gerry. I have only had a chance to spend about 15sec on each so far...as for the white/black borders...that is a consequence of decision I made regarding my website years ago...but it may very well be a time to change. Cameron
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Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 LightpaintingCameron
These are all good, but #3 in particular appeals more perhaps because the light painting is more subtle. Peter
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Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 LightpaintingBeautiful work Cameron! I too like #3. What a great series of prints these would make?
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Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 LightpaintingGiven these a whack on the side to correct the tilt....
and a crop as per Rodney's suggestion Last edited by aim54x on Wed Nov 07, 2012 10:46 am, edited 1 time in total.
Cameron
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Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 LightpaintingOn black definitely looks much better Cam
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Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 Lightpainting
really? is it just me or are they still tilted?
I would love to take credit for that but I think it was Rodney who mentioned that - however it looks heaps better! The black border makes a world of difference too, much better. gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
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The first is still a bit tilted, but I would lose the moon if I corrected it. The others are pretty close...as close as I could manage...remember that these are fisheye images so they don't really have a straight line from which I can base a correction on. Cameron
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fair call I might have a dig at these with PS adaptive wide angle and see what happens, just for giggles. gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
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