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Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 Lightpainting

PostPosted: Tue Nov 06, 2012 11:33 am
by aim54x
I have been caught out.....here are those fishy images that Rodney was asking about

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Wide but not fishy
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Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 Lightpainting

PostPosted: Tue Nov 06, 2012 1:14 pm
by Remorhaz
Wow - with that first I was thinking you'd taken it from the same side as I did but more to the left to include the moon, then wondered why there was the red/yellow EL in front of the dome (I didn't remember any being done outside the dome there) and then saw the path on the right - then it hit me - OMG you've got the moon in and the dome from the moon side - the dome looks pretty undistorted too :)

I think with #2 you need to rotate a bit to the left so it isn't falling over

#3 is very wide :)

With #4 maybe you clone out the star and crop the bottom 25% off

Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 Lightpainting

PostPosted: Tue Nov 06, 2012 2:28 pm
by biggerry
Hey Cam, good to see some images form teh night, I like teh last the best. I think they all need a bit of straightening and the first few a bit of love in the processing department just to clean things up.

Have you thought about a black border for your images rather than a white one? I think alot of your images could look better on a black border rather than a white one.

Thanks for coming out on the night.

Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 Lightpainting

PostPosted: Tue Nov 06, 2012 4:09 pm
by aim54x
Remorhaz wrote:Wow - with that first I was thinking you'd taken it from the same side as I did but more to the left to include the moon, then wondered why there was the red/yellow EL in front of the dome (I didn't remember any being done outside the dome there) and then saw the path on the right - then it hit me - OMG you've got the moon in and the dome from the moon side - the dome looks pretty undistorted too :)

I think with #2 you need to rotate a bit to the left so it isn't falling over

#3 is very wide :)

With #4 maybe you clone out the star and crop the bottom 25% off


Thanks...after I get home tonight I will address these....esp #2 and #4

Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 Lightpainting

PostPosted: Tue Nov 06, 2012 4:12 pm
by aim54x
biggerry wrote:Hey Cam, good to see some images form teh night, I like teh last the best. I think they all need a bit of straightening and the first few a bit of love in the processing department just to clean things up.

Have you thought about a black border for your images rather than a white one? I think alot of your images could look better on a black border rather than a white one.

Thanks for coming out on the night.


Thanks Gerry. I have only had a chance to spend about 15sec on each so far...as for the white/black borders...that is a consequence of decision I made regarding my website years ago...but it may very well be a time to change.

Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 Lightpainting

PostPosted: Tue Nov 06, 2012 6:18 pm
by stubbsy
Cameron

These are all good, but #3 in particular appeals more perhaps because the light painting is more subtle.

Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 Lightpainting

PostPosted: Tue Nov 06, 2012 6:54 pm
by Matt. K
Beautiful work Cameron! I too like #3. What a great series of prints these would make?

Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 Lightpainting

PostPosted: Tue Nov 06, 2012 11:37 pm
by aim54x
Given these a whack on the side to correct the tilt....

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and a crop as per Rodney's suggestion

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Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 Lightpainting

PostPosted: Wed Nov 07, 2012 9:10 am
by Remorhaz
On black definitely looks much better Cam

Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 Lightpainting

PostPosted: Wed Nov 07, 2012 10:23 am
by biggerry
aim54x wrote:Given these a whack on the side to correct the tilt....


really? is it just me or are they still tilted?

aim54x wrote:and a crop as per Gerry's suggestion


I would love to take credit for that but I think it was Rodney who mentioned that - however it looks heaps better!

The black border makes a world of difference too, much better.

Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 Lightpainting

PostPosted: Wed Nov 07, 2012 10:47 am
by aim54x
biggerry wrote:
aim54x wrote:Given these a whack on the side to correct the tilt....


really? is it just me or are they still tilted?


The first is still a bit tilted, but I would lose the moon if I corrected it. The others are pretty close...as close as I could manage...remember that these are fisheye images so they don't really have a straight line from which I can base a correction on.

Re: Something Fishy....Sculptures 2012 Lightpainting

PostPosted: Wed Nov 07, 2012 1:52 pm
by biggerry
aim54x wrote:
biggerry wrote:
aim54x wrote:Given these a whack on the side to correct the tilt....


really? is it just me or are they still tilted?


The first is still a bit tilted, but I would lose the moon if I corrected it. The others are pretty close...as close as I could manage...remember that these are fisheye images so they don't really have a straight line from which I can base a correction on.


fair call :up:
I might have a dig at these with PS adaptive wide angle and see what happens, just for giggles.