Autumn in DC

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Autumn in DC

Postby surenj on Wed Dec 05, 2012 1:14 am

I was recently in Washington DC and got to experience a bit of Autumn (fall apparently!) colors. I didn't notice the figure is slightly blurred until I uploaded to flickr! It's so difficult to get good help that will keep still.

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Re: Autumn in DC

Postby Remorhaz on Wed Dec 05, 2012 10:28 am

Hi Suren - I'm not sold sorry - that light is really really bright - I like what it's done on the leaves of the tree but including the light itself makes it too dominant. I'm also not sure if this speaks Autumn to me - my initial reaction was it was the white balance that provided the colour feel and not the autumness
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Re: Autumn in DC

Postby aim54x on Wed Dec 05, 2012 11:05 am

I am surprised that you have not "Suren-d" this image. The lamp dominates the image, detracting from the gentleman under the lamp post, who unfortunately has shifted during the exposure. The colours do look WB contrived as well.
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Re: Autumn in DC

Postby biggerry on Thu Dec 06, 2012 3:43 pm

imo, it has merit, however the lack of sharpness in the person kills it, I reckon you could selectively sharpen that area up that would go a long way to improving it. I do like the movement and the way the bright light draws your eye into that part of the image
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