Still Life

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Still Life

Postby the foto fanatic on Sat Apr 02, 2005 4:05 pm

Today's still life (click pic for larger image):

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Postby mudder on Sat Apr 02, 2005 9:10 pm

Dunno if it's me or my monitor but it seems to need extra contrast...?
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Postby kipper on Sat Apr 02, 2005 9:25 pm

Yep, needs more contrast. Doubt you'd class it as Still Life either?
Then again I don't know what constitutes Still Life, just thought Still Life was all that arty farty stuff where you take a photo of forks under some sort of lighting that produces nice shadows, welding gear (like done here) or a horse saddle with stirrups on a bed of straw etc. Taking a photo of some flowers tends to me to come under Nature photography.
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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Apr 02, 2005 9:33 pm

Certainly needs more contrast - it is very light on my monitor.

Kipper - I suppose anything that is not moving could be defined as a still life - except maybe a corpse :roll:
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Postby xerubus on Sat Apr 02, 2005 11:46 pm

trevor... i will be blatantly obvious and that's what i expect from people. i don't like it... and i say that because i know you can do a hell of a lot better.

If it was a noobie that posted... i'd say it was good and needed a little bit more contrast..

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