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Home work

PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2012 6:11 pm
by zafra52
Taken without being noticed, such was her concentration,
two weeks ago.

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Re: Home work

PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2012 7:25 pm
by Remorhaz
I expect not much more of that happening now (given end of year/school) :)

Re: Home work

PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2012 7:30 pm
by aim54x
Such dedication!

Re: Home work

PostPosted: Tue Dec 11, 2012 12:35 pm
by surenj
BW all the way Zafra!

Re: Home work

PostPosted: Wed Dec 12, 2012 7:14 pm
by zafra52
Thank you for your comments. This is the B&W version as surenj recommended.

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Re: Home work

PostPosted: Wed Dec 12, 2012 7:27 pm
by chrisk
wow, im torn...at first i thought this would be a classic mono image, now im not so sure. there is a warmth to the colour version which you just lost so i prefer the colour. its a beautiful candid.

Re: Home work

PostPosted: Wed Dec 12, 2012 11:02 pm
by aim54x
Love the Mono image

Re: Home work

PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2012 3:56 pm
by gstark
I think that the B&W needs a broader range and more contrast. There's no solid blacks, nor any solid whites, to complete the spectrum.

You've nailed the light: the face is beautifully and evenly lit. This is a wonderful candid portrait.

Re: Home work

PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2012 8:49 pm
by zafra52
Thanks for the comment. You are right, all I did was to
desaturate the colour image. I made this version by
discarding all the colours in the raw file.

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Re: Home work

PostPosted: Sat Dec 15, 2012 7:51 am
by Remorhaz
I prefer this second mono conversion to the first Zafra - has a more "glowy" look (and I like what it's done on the face and hair better)

Re: Home work

PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2012 9:20 am
by zafra52
Thank you for your comments.

Re: Home work

PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2012 10:42 am
by Wink
I like the coloured shot the best. It makes the glow on her face more obvious.

The second B&W has brightened up too much in the wrong areas IMO. Her arm and the paper are really bright now and the background is leaning that way too. The colour version has that on the paper too, but I find it less distracting with the warmth in the face coming out.

Re: Home work

PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2012 12:25 pm
by gstark
The second B&W is much better, but to my eyes it still needs extra contrast.

Re: Home work

PostPosted: Tue Dec 18, 2012 7:53 pm
by zafra52
Thank you Gary. I finally managed to get around to do
as you suggested. I added a bit more contrast.

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Re: Home work

PostPosted: Wed Dec 19, 2012 1:00 pm
by biggerry
BW meh. The colour version all teh way. The warmth of the light is lost in the BW versions and for me this is key to generating the mood associated with late night study.

Re: Home work

PostPosted: Wed Dec 19, 2012 8:50 pm
by zafra52
Thank you all for your comments and suggestions