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Jeep Cherokee

PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2012 10:20 am
by Wink
Hi guys,

Got the chance to do some more light painting the last weekend and thought I'd share some of the shots...

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It was extremely windy that night which made it hard to control the light, but I got there in the end.

C & C appreciated as always. :cheers:

Re: Jeep Cherokee

PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2012 10:32 am
by Remorhaz
Hi Adam - I like the idea of the distortion in the first but maybe it needed even more (closer) to really emphasise it - making it a statement which is intentional. I don't like it in the second and I reckon you'd have been better off getting further away and using a longer focal length for this angle of view.

Lighting wise I like the balance of the ambient you've got - that twilight sky is very nice - the jeep is perhaps a little too well (evenly) lit perhaps (maybe a few subtle shadows would have been nice) but thats possibly just a personal feel.

Re: Jeep Cherokee

PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2012 10:50 am
by Wink
Thanks Rodney.

I've never tried anything other than short focal lengths. I'll definitely have to take a longer lens next time and work with that for a bit.

Thanks for the suggestion. :)

Jeep Cherokee

PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2012 6:56 pm
by Geoff M
Superb work as usual Adam, the first is the standout for me. I can't offer any suggestions for improvement, you nailed it!

Re: Jeep Cherokee

PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2012 9:04 pm
by zafra52
I think this is a very good sample of how light painting
is used as a tool to enhance an image and not as a
subjects on on its own. Well done!

Re: Jeep Cherokee

PostPosted: Sun Dec 16, 2012 10:45 pm
by Wink
Thanks guys. Much appreciated. :cheers:

Re: Jeep Cherokee

PostPosted: Wed Dec 19, 2012 1:15 pm
by biggerry
Nice Adam, as I mentioned on gplus, i think the harsh light line on the ground could do with a bit of feathering and those pipes in the BG are bit annoying. Other than that they are pretty cool.

Whilst white subjects are easy to light, I think they present a light uniformity issue, often you get those patches of grey which i find annoying, they can't be explained away as shadows and for me I have found selectively brightening and desaturating some areas in post can help the uniformity.