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Skylights

PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 1:37 pm
by zafra52
This picture is from the celing of the ambulance bay of a modern
hospital in Madrid.

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Re: Skylights

PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 3:44 pm
by Matt. K
Clean, classical, modern and well spotted. Great image. To take a part of modern or ancient architecture and present it as an abstraction is a skill in its own right.

Re: Skylights

PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 4:47 pm
by stubbsy
Superb. Everything is perfect here - the crop, the angle, the exposure... 10/10

Re: Skylights

PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 4:54 pm
by Remorhaz
Really like it zafra - even the timing for the sunlight coming through on the left

Skylights

PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 5:53 pm
by chrisk
Excellent. The lines and the circles intermingled like that looks brilliant !

Re: Skylights

PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 6:11 pm
by zafra52
Thank you all for your kind comments.

Re: Skylights

PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 6:31 pm
by Mj
I love this image... my kinda thing... but... I've one niggle with the presentation.
Given that this image is ALL about symmetry and shape I would suggest removing the shadow framing as it detracts mightily (in my eye) to the rest of the image.
I's also suggest that the shadow is way to dark for the image but in this case I would remove it completely.
This is NOT due to a phobia of such framing... I use it myself quite a bit, but in this case I think it does significant damage to an otherwise beautiful piece of art.

mmm... no soapbox emoticon... so ... :violin:

Re: Skylights

PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 6:48 pm
by sirhc55
Excellent - enhorabuena

Re: Skylights

PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 8:31 pm
by aim54x
Brilliant!

Re: Skylights

PostPosted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 12:39 pm
by zafra52
Thank you for your suggestions

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Re: Skylights

PostPosted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 4:00 pm
by Matt. K
I agree with Michael and the retake looks better.