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Black Swan

PostPosted: Sun Feb 03, 2013 1:31 pm
by zafra52
Just enough time before the bird moved away...

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Re: Black Swan

PostPosted: Mon Feb 04, 2013 7:03 pm
by aim54x
that is a great capture! I love the textures, but something makes me want to drop the exposure a bit and make that swan darker

Re: Black Swan

PostPosted: Mon Feb 04, 2013 7:25 pm
by zafra52
Thank you for the comment. Do you think this is better?

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Black Swan

PostPosted: Mon Feb 04, 2013 8:43 pm
by Geoff M
I prefer the second, but I would be inclined to make blacks even blacker.

Black Swan

PostPosted: Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:17 pm
by chrisk
Very pretty image and I agree, it's still a half stop over IMO. I'd push it as dark as possible until it starts to lose the textural definition.

Re: Black Swan

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2013 9:22 am
by aim54x
This 2nd version is definitely better than the first, and i will also vote to experiment with going darker.

Re: Black Swan

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2013 7:05 pm
by zafra52
Any blacker and you will not see it.

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Black Swan

PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2013 9:43 pm
by chrisk
I can only speak for my own taste, but IMO the final version is brilliant.

Re: Black Swan

PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 7:00 am
by Remorhaz
Rooz wrote:I can only speak for my own taste, but IMO the final version is brilliant.


I have to concur - last version is the best - the composition was always excellent

Black Swan

PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 7:15 am
by Geoff M
Perfect!

Re: Black Swan

PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 8:33 am
by aim54x
:agree: love this version!!

Re: Black Swan

PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2013 10:17 am
by bigsarg7
Yep, I agree with the other folks, that last edited version looks great! composition wise....brilliant loved it!! well done

Re: Black Swan

PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2013 3:25 pm
by zafra52
Thank you for your feedback and encouragement, guys.

Re: Black Swan

PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2013 4:00 pm
by gstark
The last version is de-lovely.

Well done; you've kept the blacks black, without losing them in the blacks. That is not an easy task.