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Panorama - The Brickpit...

Postby Remorhaz on Sat Apr 27, 2013 9:30 pm

Within the Sydney Olympic Park precinct lies "The Brickpit" which allowed me to try out my new Sigma 15mm f/2.8 fisheye lens to take this stitched panorama image.

This is a handheld HDR panorama composed of five (5) sets of three (3) bracketed images.

Click through for a much larger version that can be seen properly...

The Brickpit
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any thoughts for improvement?
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Re: Panorama - The Brickpit...

Postby zafra52 on Sun Apr 28, 2013 10:55 am

I like it,but I am not sure how you could
improve it further all the elements are
there in place, colour and composition.
I guess as a big print would look very good
on a developer's wall. I am not being funny,
I am strugling to think where else would one
put it.
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Re: Panorama - The Brickpit...

Postby Remorhaz on Sun Apr 28, 2013 3:34 pm

Thanks Zafra
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Panorama - The Brickpit...

Postby chrisk on Sun Apr 28, 2013 10:35 pm

Rodney, as has become the norm and in fact our expectation of you now, the technical aspects of the shot and it's processing are essentially flawless.

For me, I think it could use some point of interest. It's a big scene without something drawing me in and pausing for reflection and appreciation. I know you're not the prettiest subject in the world but I think in the absence of a focal point I'd be thinking of sticking yourself into here scenes somehow like you did in that last landscape that worked so perfectly. Maybe about to skim a stone on the water or something...

As an idea, I saw a photo similar to this of the same place a while ago and in the foreground the photographer put himself in the frame, only on quite a small scale, with a scourer, rubber gloves and a bucket. It was a brilliant image adding that point of interest. I got a good chuckle out of that one and it made me remember it immediately even to this day.
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Re: Panorama - The Brickpit...

Postby Remorhaz on Mon Apr 29, 2013 8:17 pm

Thanks Chris - really appreciate your candid feedback.
I like your idea a lot and if I ever get back out there (and have another party willing to help :))
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