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Epic Day Out - Part 1 - Austinmer Sunrise...

Postby Remorhaz on Wed May 08, 2013 9:26 am

Joined three friends for an epic day of photography. Our gourmet feast of photographic delights included a 3:30AM start, a sunrise seascape session, a day shooting at an air show, a sunset seascape session, a light painting session in an abandoned railway tunnel with a post midnight finish.

Part One we visit the lazy coastal town of Austinmer (about an hours drive south of Sydney) for a dawn seascape shoot at their tidal pools.

I'd be interested in any post processing suggestions for any of these

Morning Refresh
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and just on sunrise

Where Dawn Treads
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about 15 minutes after sunrise (6:45AM) we got a second chance with the sun breaking through the lower clouds and underlighting the high clouds

Second Chance is Golden
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Later still (about 50 minutes after sunrise - 7:20AM) we got awesome God rays streaming down off the coast through a really interesting pattern of clouds in the sky

Gods Hand, Stormy Surge
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The Flow
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Re: Epic Day Out - Part 1 - Austinmer Sunrise...

Postby Murray Foote on Wed May 08, 2013 2:49 pm

Some great images there. The first two, I think it would help to make the blue in the sky darker. My eye tends to go out there rather than where it should. The last two, I think more contrast in the foam may help.
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Re: Epic Day Out - Part 1 - Austinmer Sunrise...

Postby Remorhaz on Thu May 09, 2013 10:47 pm

Murray Foote wrote:Some great images there. The first two, I think it would help to make the blue in the sky darker. My eye tends to go out there rather than where it should. The last two, I think more contrast in the foam may help.


Thanks Murray - and I totally agree on the second count. I'm still a little ambivalent on the first two - I'll see what lowering the colour temp of the sky in the first two do for me - thanks
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Re: Epic Day Out - Part 1 - Austinmer Sunrise...

Postby Remorhaz on Thu May 09, 2013 10:55 pm

A minor rework of the first:

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and a more major rework of the last:

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Re: Epic Day Out - Part 1 - Austinmer Sunrise...

Postby Murray Foote on Fri May 10, 2013 1:12 am

Both greatly improved, I think.
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Re: Epic Day Out - Part 1 - Austinmer Sunrise...

Postby zafra52 on Fri May 10, 2013 6:09 pm

I agree, much better.
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