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A triptych created from three of the vertically composed images I made at Austinmer.

The left frame was actually taken just on sunrise, the middle frame about 20 minutes before sunrise and the right a bigstopper long exposure taken after sunrise.

Any feedback and PP suggestions welcomed

Three Faces of Austinmer

doesn't work for me rodney. the images are too similar and there's not enough interest in them to carry it off.

Rooz wrote:doesn't work for me rodney. the images are too similar and there's not enough interest in them to carry it off

Thanks Chris - appreciated

suren it.

the last image the triptych is worthy on its own.

I'm with Chris on this. Not sure what to suggest, given the similarity of each of the images.

biggerry wrote:suren it.

the last image the triptych is worthy on its own.

I'm going to add my +1 to this

Ok OK

I note that you have a very similar image to the last frame Gerry (taken from a smidge further back I think?)

First of all, they are beautiful images. From a trippy itch perspective there is an element missing...for instance, something like, let's presume in frame 1 there is a champagne bottle and 2 glasses full of bubbly. Next frame the glasses are empty and 1 glass is tipped over...last frame bottle and 1 glass smashed and other glass missing. All of this in the foreground of course. So we get a kind of mysterious narrative. Or something else along those lines. Or some other element that relates to each frame.

Good try, but it doesn't seem to work.
I think the horizon needs to be levelled,
but on the whole the three good pictures
don't improve the composition.

They're all good Rodney, as has been stated, but I have to agree, I don't think the triptych works here. They don't need a triptych. Maybe a print of each in three separate rooms....