A little bit of Italy

Got a thin skin? Then look elsewhere. Post a link to an image that you've made, and invite others to offer their critiques. Honesty is encouraged, but please be positive in your constructive criticism. Flaming and just plain nastiness will not be tolerated. Please note that this is not an area for you to showcase your images, nor is this a place for you to show-off where you have been. This is an area for you to post images so that you may share with us a technique that you have mastered, or are trying to master. Typically, no more than about four images should be posted in any one post or thread, and the maximum size of any side of any image should not exceed 950 px.

Moderators: Greg B, Nnnnsic, Geoff, Glen, gstark, Moderators

Forum rules
Please note that image critiquing is a matter of give and take: if you post images for critique, and you then expect to receive criticism, then it is also reasonable, fair and appropriate that, in return, you post your critique of the images of other members here as a matter of courtesy. So please do offer your critique of the images of others; your opinion is important, and will help everyone here enjoy their visit to far greater extent.

Also please note that, unless you state something to the contrary, other members might attempt to repost your image with their own post processing applied. We see this as an acceptable form of critique, but should you prefer that others not modify your work, this is perfectly ok, and you should state this, either within your post, or within your signature.

Images posted here should conform with the general forum guidelines. Image sizes should not exceed 950 pixels along the largest side (height or width) and typically no more than four images per post or thread.

Please also ensure that you have a meaningful location included in your profile. Please refer to the FAQ for details of what "meaningful" is.

A little bit of Italy

Postby Mj on Thu Jun 13, 2013 12:28 pm

So I've been very absent for some time but trying to keep an online appearance whilst traveling is still quite a pain.
Good to see the usual suspects still flying the flag so to speak and sharing some cracking good work...
Thought I might provide a few happy snappies so here they are... somewhat hit and miss as I travel with a non-photo-sympathetic partner.

Image
Image
Image
Image
Photography is not a crime, but perhaps my abuse of artistic license is?
User avatar
Mj
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1048
Joined: Fri Aug 20, 2004 3:37 pm
Location: Breakfast Point, Sydney {Australia}

Re: A little bit of Italy

Postby Remorhaz on Thu Jun 13, 2013 12:42 pm

Great to see you back MJ :)

I don't mind the first two but find the vignette a bit strong in both

The green doors are pretty funky but I kinda want to see a little more up those blue stairs - perhaps a step or two to the right and that would also have solved the slight keystoning as well

That bridge is fascinating - are those houses built on it?
D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
Rodney - My Photo Blog
Want: Fast Wide (14|20|24)
User avatar
Remorhaz
Senior Member
 
Posts: 2547
Joined: Thu Apr 29, 2010 8:14 pm
Location: Sydney - Lower North Shore - D600

Re: A little bit of Italy

Postby Mj on Thu Jun 13, 2013 1:05 pm

Ta...

I agree re the vignette but it's just kinda what I felt to do with those... interestingly many non-togs really like them that way (go figure).
The doors are more an affect of wonky walls I think, but I'll check... what I was hoping to capture was a resident to poke their head out but I was ordered forth before the opportunity was to present.
The bridge is the Ponte Vecchio in Florence... I might suggest a somewhat overhyped landmark... full of tourists and touts selling junk.
The buildings are all full of jewellry shops awash with gold these days.
Photography is not a crime, but perhaps my abuse of artistic license is?
User avatar
Mj
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1048
Joined: Fri Aug 20, 2004 3:37 pm
Location: Breakfast Point, Sydney {Australia}

Re: A little bit of Italy

Postby Glen on Thu Jun 13, 2013 1:15 pm

Envious of your trip MJ :)

The scooter image looks like it could be used for a postcard.
http://wolfeyes.com.au Tactical Torches - Tactical Flashlights Police torch rechargeable torch military torch police military HID surefire flashlight LED torch tactical torch rechargeable wolf eyes flashlight surefire torch wolf eyes tactical torchpolice torch
Thank You
User avatar
Glen
Moderator
 
Posts: 11819
Joined: Sat Aug 07, 2004 3:14 pm
Location: Sydney - Neutral Bay - Nikon

Re: A little bit of Italy

Postby Matt. K on Fri Jun 14, 2013 4:38 pm

First image is superlative! The images have that 'Fuji' look to them???
Regards

Matt. K
User avatar
Matt. K
Former Outstanding Member Of The Year and KM
 
Posts: 9981
Joined: Mon Sep 06, 2004 7:12 pm
Location: North Nowra

Re: A little bit of Italy

Postby Mj on Fri Jun 14, 2013 5:33 pm

Matt ... I bet you can pick a Fuji image at 50 paces !!!

Whilst away all I took was an x-e1 body, 18-55 lens, 8mm samyang manual fisheye and a couple of SD cards... all up weight was a relief.
The fish proved useful but a real challenge to use cold with little practice.
None of these shots were with the fish but I'll see if any were worth a post.
Photography is not a crime, but perhaps my abuse of artistic license is?
User avatar
Mj
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1048
Joined: Fri Aug 20, 2004 3:37 pm
Location: Breakfast Point, Sydney {Australia}

A little bit of Italy

Postby chrisk on Fri Jun 14, 2013 6:35 pm

Mj, these are great images. I agree with Rodney about the stairs, they would have made a nice color injection to the image. I quite like the vignette. Loving the scooter image, what pp did you use for that ? Fabulous. Wtf with the houses on the bridge ?? That's awesome ! Would love to see more.

No idea what is "fuji look" about the images. lol
EM1 l 7.5 l 12-40 l 14 l 17 l 25 l 45 l 60 l 75 l AW1 l V3
User avatar
chrisk
Senior Member
 
Posts: 3317
Joined: Fri Mar 09, 2007 8:50 pm
Location: Oyster Bay, Sydney

Re: A little bit of Italy

Postby Mj on Mon Jun 17, 2013 9:49 am

The scooter had a few enhancements mostly in LR5.
Gave it a medium contrast boost and some sharpening followed by a radial filter for the vignette.
Also some desat on the background. In PS I removed a couple of items in the background to clean up the image and retain focus on the scooter.
A final square crop I I left it at that... there's always other treatments or simply more touch up that I could do but unless it had a commercial purpose I'm happy to leave it as is.
Photography is not a crime, but perhaps my abuse of artistic license is?
User avatar
Mj
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1048
Joined: Fri Aug 20, 2004 3:37 pm
Location: Breakfast Point, Sydney {Australia}

Re: A little bit of Italy

Postby zafra52 on Wed Jun 19, 2013 7:23 pm

Great photographs. I think the first one is the best.
User avatar
zafra52
Senior Member
 
Posts: 4827
Joined: Thu Dec 01, 2005 10:22 pm
Location: Brisbane

Re: A little bit of Italy

Postby Mj on Sun Jun 23, 2013 9:05 pm

A couple of dining options in Venice...

The boogieman restaurant
Image

A grand canal estate
Image
Photography is not a crime, but perhaps my abuse of artistic license is?
User avatar
Mj
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1048
Joined: Fri Aug 20, 2004 3:37 pm
Location: Breakfast Point, Sydney {Australia}

Re: A little bit of Italy

Postby Sylvia on Sun Jun 23, 2013 9:52 pm

Wow,
Really the last one. Opulence comes to mind. The only thing I find distracting is the table right at the bottom. But..
Nikons.
Nikkor's.
User avatar
Sylvia
Member
 
Posts: 178
Joined: Fri Jul 11, 2008 3:46 pm
Location: Central Coast

Re: A little bit of Italy

Postby ozimax on Tue Jul 09, 2013 12:03 am

These are fantastic. The first is extraordinary & the scooter is just, well, quintessential Italiano. Your Fuji is singing, but it takes a backseat to the skill of the photographer.
President, A.A.A.A.A (Australian Association Against Acronym Abuse)
Canon EOS R6, RF 24-105 F4, RF 70-200 F4, RF 35mm F1.8, RF 16mm F2.8
"And ye shall know the truth, and the truth shall make you free." (John 8:32)
User avatar
ozimax
Senior Member
 
Posts: 5289
Joined: Wed Jan 05, 2005 11:58 am
Location: Coffs Harbour, NSW


Return to Image Reviews and Critiques