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Into the Light

PostPosted: Tue Dec 17, 2013 4:40 pm
by Mj
So for a little change of pace on the forum a high key model shot...

Image

Re: Into the Light

PostPosted: Tue Dec 17, 2013 7:19 pm
by zafra52
I like the figure looking into the light, but I think
it would work even better without the insinuation
of the curtains or the barrier in the floor, which
I guess is an sliding door.

Re: Into the Light

PostPosted: Tue Dec 17, 2013 9:08 pm
by Mj
Yes... I will probably remove the door frame below...
just a matter of some time and effort to get the right result...
not so sure about the curtains although I've take that quite some way already.

Re: Into the Light

PostPosted: Tue Dec 17, 2013 10:52 pm
by zafra52
You can try paste some curtains on the other side
to balance the image. If there is more door and
curtain it may add more context to the subject.

The main thing is that you and your subject like
and are comfortable with the final photo.

Re: Into the Light

PostPosted: Tue Dec 17, 2013 11:34 pm
by Matt. K
Lovely, sensuous form and texture. Beautifully crafted....but I think it would have been better if we could have seen her face.

Re: Into the Light

PostPosted: Wed Dec 18, 2013 1:09 am
by the foto fanatic
I would remove all extraneous matter so that she was on a pure white background.

Great work maintaining the exposure on the model and her clothing.