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Missed it by that much

Postby chrisk on Sun Jan 19, 2014 11:42 am

you know... the shots where almost everything worked as you wanted but was missing that one critical thing...

exactly how i wanted it, all 3 visible, exposure dead on...the perfect mono but i chopped the top of his damn horn off.
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rare you get the cats up close but i couldnt manage to get eye contact in a single frame.
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this guy obediently stayed still while i shot some frames, the background colour perfect...but the damn thing was in full sun so the lighting and contrast is too harsh.
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Re: Missed it by that much

Postby zafra52 on Sun Jan 19, 2014 11:50 am

Excellent all of them. However, #1 is #1 for me. I like
the composition, the contrast and its almost surreal
look, which makes it visually so appealing to me.
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Re: Missed it by that much

Postby sirhc55 on Sun Jan 19, 2014 12:22 pm

Take #1 and make a massive print for the wall. It is that good.
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Re: Missed it by that much

Postby Matt. K on Sun Jan 19, 2014 3:03 pm

#1 looks like a pro advertisement. It's very different and demands attention. I like the Snow leopard. It's one of the best I've seen of that very difficult to catch creature.
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Re: Missed it by that much

Postby ozimax on Sun Jan 19, 2014 9:45 pm

The leopard is amazing. The giraffes are also excellent. I understand what your comments about chopping the horn off, but I don't really think it matters in this case. I've never seen three giraffes like this before.
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Re: Missed it by that much

Postby chrisk on Sun Jan 19, 2014 10:52 pm

Thanks everyone for the consolation to my incompetence. lol

Ozi, I was on a "roar and snore" event at taronga zoo with my son. One of our experiences was walking into the giraffe enclosure and feeding the giraffes while they were in their house. That's why I could get the shot. All 3 were inside sticking their heads out into the sun so the inside of their house was dark but the low sun was lighting them up. I saw this shot immediately but couldn't pull it off. That's why I'm annoyed at myself cos I won't get another chance like that and it's a rookie error that did me over.
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Re: Missed it by that much

Postby biggerry on Mon Jan 20, 2014 10:15 pm

still nice stuff Chris, some days it's just on and others well..its like golf ;)

Have you tried wrangling some detail from the shadows on that macro shot?
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Re: Missed it by that much

Postby chrisk on Mon Jan 20, 2014 11:12 pm

biggerry wrote:
Have you tried wrangling some detail from the shadows on that macro shot?


Yeah, thanks Gerry. The body of the bug was brought out by around 1.5 stops in post; that's as much as the oly can deliver without it looking funny. The shot was originally UE by around 3 stops to bring out the background colour and protect blown highlights as much as possible in the harsh sun.
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Missed it by that much

Postby Geoff M on Wed Jan 22, 2014 8:56 am

The giraffe shot is excellent despite the short coming of the cropped horn. Print it BIG.


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