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Lonely boat at the end of a sad looking jetty.

PostPosted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 11:17 pm
by biggerry
Comments, suggestions or critique welcome, i'll take the good the bad and the ugly. :)
Too dark? not enough detail in the jetty or trees?
I really wanted to simplify the image and let the composition speak more than the colours, which in this particular image were actually quite nice too.

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Re: Lonely boat at the end of a sad looking jetty.

PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 10:03 am
by aim54x
The boat is a tad small, but the jetty and the reflections look great. it may work better displayed large

Re: Lonely boat at the end of a sad looking jetty.

PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 10:19 am
by Matt. K
Gerry
A knockout image....can just imagine it framed up at a couple of metres long. The only suggestion I can make is to lighten up the jetty so that it drags the eye to the boat..

Re: Lonely boat at the end of a sad looking jetty.

PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 6:11 pm
by zafra52
I agree with the above comments.

Re: Lonely boat at the end of a sad looking jetty.

PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 7:35 pm
by ozimax
Spectacular.

Re: Lonely boat at the end of a sad looking jetty.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 28, 2014 6:38 am
by gstark
Wonderfully so.

Re: Lonely boat at the end of a sad looking jetty.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 28, 2014 1:36 pm
by biggerry
aim54x wrote:The boat is a tad small, but the jetty and the reflections look great. it may work better displayed large


yeah I am guessing it looks better full size :)

Matt. K wrote:Gerry
A knockout image....can just imagine it framed up at a couple of metres long. The only suggestion I can make is to lighten up the jetty so that it drags the eye to the boat..

spot on Matt, i seem to have a bit of a problem atm with brightness in alot of my images :)

zafra52 wrote:I agree with the above comments.
ozimax wrote:Spectacular.
gstark wrote:Wonderfully so.

cheers guys.

Re: Lonely boat at the end of a sad looking jetty.

PostPosted: Sat Mar 29, 2014 6:37 pm
by Geoff M
Love it.....maybe reduce the vignette a little?