I don't mind the image and find the silhouette of the trees quite interesting. Much prefer the colour version.
I like the play of the top half being cool and the lower half being warm - I'd be inclined to accentuate that even further.
I also find the slight blown-out sun spot on the water distracting to the eye and would use the healing brush to fix that in Photoshop (along with straightening the horizon

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I took the liberty of doing a quick 60 second edit to show you what I saw (I hope you don't mind - if so please let me know and I will remove).

Adjustments made were:
- straighten horizon
- adjust channel mixer (Blue channel, raised blues and lowered greens)
- healing brush to improve bright sun spot on water