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Crossing bridgesBridge1 by Ozimax, on Flickr
Bridge3 by Ozimax, on Flickr Hobart11 by Ozimax, on Flickr Hobart9 by Ozimax, on Flickr President, A.A.A.A.A (Australian Association Against Acronym Abuse)
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Re: Crossing bridgesGreat job, Number one i really like the contrast in the bridge, however I find the right side and the distant hill side area needing more contrast, looks a bit flat to me. Where number two and three I really like, yet the more I look into number 2 I feel like I'm leaning to the left a little and having more weight on the left side ... so hard to explain..... i like it a lot but this feeling I get I can't explain properly.... not sure if it can be fixed in an edit, I think its more of an angle of the camera as it was taken. I think if you had of stepped to the right a little further it wouldn't have had that feeling.... maybe try crop from the right side a little more?? or not. But I love the shades of whites, greys etc in number 3.
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Re: Crossing bridgesYes, number two for me as well. Given this is Tassie, I'm trying to work out whether that's symmetry in this image, or cemetery.
I suspect that it's the shadow of the bridge causing this effect, as it falls off towards the left of the image. I suspect that it can't be easily fixed in post. Ozi may need to revisit the location and reshoot at a different time of day. g.
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Re: Crossing bridgesI prefer #2, 1 & 3. Excellent pics Ozi.
Re: Crossing bridgesThanks all. I've been staring at #2 and all I have is a queasy, headachy feeling...
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Re: Crossing bridgesI like that first one Ozi man - i find the sky just a bit bright tho, pulls me away from the bridge and vanishing point.. possible crop from teh top (10-15%) or maybe selective vignetting?
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No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
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