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Holiday snap

Postby TonyT on Wed Nov 09, 2016 4:34 am

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Re: Holiday snap

Postby ozimax on Wed Nov 09, 2016 10:11 am

A tranquil scene of simple serenity. Or something like that.
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Re: Holiday snap

Postby zafra52 on Sun Nov 13, 2016 7:14 pm

Very nice shot.
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Re: Holiday snap

Postby Mr Darcy on Mon Nov 21, 2016 11:13 am

Nice as is, but I cannot help thinking it could use some more contrast to bring a little drama to the scene. I also think the person on the sandbar in the middle distance adds nothing. Perhaps clone him out.
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Re: Holiday snap

Postby TonyT on Mon Nov 21, 2016 3:50 pm

Thanks I revisit with your suggests in mind.
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Re: Holiday snap

Postby TonyT on Tue Nov 22, 2016 6:18 am

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Re: Holiday snap

Postby inmotion on Tue Nov 22, 2016 5:55 pm

Must have been good advice-much better now
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