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Learning lightIve mostly shot landscape but find myself interested in portraiture more and more so ive brought some cheap lighting set ups and have been playing with some still life stuff for practice as i cant find a model
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Re: Learning lightThese are Great. I can see you are well on your way.
You can always use yourself as a model. The best reference I have found on learning light is Light Science and Magic Here is one link. There are lots. I have even seen it in Dymocks in Sydney. https://www.amazon.com/Light-Science-In ... 0240802756 Greg
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Re: Learning lightI like the first best. The light is more vibrant and the shallow depth of focus makes it more interesting than the second, which appears somewhat flat.
Re: Learning lightI see you have mastered the horizon-less background. Not sure I like the blue colour though. Neutrals, such as grey,white or black usually more complimentary to the eye. Nice work!
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Matt. K
Re: Learning lighti disagree Matt.
I think the blue works really well against the wood of the knife. The first in particular. Greg
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Re: Learning lightHi Greg!
I feel the blue dominates the image and slight overpowers the main subject. That should not be the role of the background. Just my opinion. Regards
Matt. K
Re: Learning lightNikon D7100/D7200, Nikkor 18-55, Nikkor 55-300, Nikkor 30, Nikkor 105 macro, Nikkor 10 - 24, Tokina 11 - 16, Tamron 150-600mm, SB600, Misc other
Re: Learning lightNikon D7100/D7200, Nikkor 18-55, Nikkor 55-300, Nikkor 30, Nikkor 105 macro, Nikkor 10 - 24, Tokina 11 - 16, Tamron 150-600mm, SB600, Misc other
Re: Learning lightMuch prefer that last version. The subject pops off the background and demands ore attention.
Regards
Matt. K
Re: Learning lightI suspect that a part of the issue that Matt is highlighting might be related to the texture of the background, which appears to me to be some sort of a felt style of fabric.
In the first of the blue background images, and again in the last (grey) one, the texture of the felt can be seen. While having the texture in clear focus shows that the image is in correct focus, as Matt has said, that is not the background's purpose. In cases such as this, where the subject is sitting directly upon the background, a flatter, less textured background surface might be the order of the day. Otherwise, perhaps finding some way to elevate the subject off the surface and provide some separation between to the two items (how are your levitation skills, Dave ?) might help things along. g.
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Re: Learning lightIts on black cardboard, how would one go about levetating it, im sure that would call for some fancy photoshop skills that i dont have. I have some shiny black plastic i might try that tonight just for fun.
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Ok, yes .... cardboard? I can see that now; thanks. Levitate? Not easy, but there's a few different ways, but the actual method depends upon the subject. Often you can support the subject with something small and unobtrusive, towards the rear of the subject. But I don't think that would work with this subject. What about some sort of support at the rear, coming from the back "wall" of your background? I'm thinking a couple of bamboo skewers, attached to the rear of the subject using blue tack, and attached to the back wall of your background? This could be set so that the subject is an inch or two above the floor of your field of view. g.
Gary Stark Nikon, Canon, Bronica .... stuff The people who want English to be the official language of the United States are uncomfortable with their leaders being fluent in it - US Pres. Bartlet
Re: Learning lightYou could use Photoshop to extract the image and make a new background. I've done it a few time, but it might not work.
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yes but im not real good with photoshop. Nikon D7100/D7200, Nikkor 18-55, Nikkor 55-300, Nikkor 30, Nikkor 105 macro, Nikkor 10 - 24, Tokina 11 - 16, Tamron 150-600mm, SB600, Misc other
Re: Learning lightNikon D7100/D7200, Nikkor 18-55, Nikkor 55-300, Nikkor 30, Nikkor 105 macro, Nikkor 10 - 24, Tokina 11 - 16, Tamron 150-600mm, SB600, Misc other
Re: Learning lightedited in Lightroom.
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Re: Learning lightSee how easy levitation can be?
The last of these is just right. IMHO, of course. Well done. g.
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