Whitby from Pier

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Whitby from Pier

Postby kipper on Sat Apr 09, 2005 4:26 pm

Whitby taken from Pier after sunset (will providing exif data after I come back from shops).

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ISO 200
Metering: Matrix
Focal Length: 18mm (18-70MM DX)
Shutter Speed: 1/60th
Aperture: F/8
WB: Auto


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Postby Killakoala on Sat Apr 09, 2005 4:35 pm

I just love this image. I spent a lot of time just looking at all the acitivity going on, the castle on the hill, the tall ship in the harbour in the distance, the sunset etc...

Great photo. i really enjoyed looking at this one, expecially as i have been there, but had forgotten how it looked. Now you have jogged my memory.

Thank you Kipper.
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Postby phillipb on Sat Apr 09, 2005 4:41 pm

Yep, I agree with Steve.
Although I would try selecting the sky and adjusting the levels, it may give the sunset a bit more impact.
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Postby gstark on Sat Apr 09, 2005 5:03 pm

Great image. I love the way that the pier leads the eye into the photo, with the subdued sunset reflected in the water to balance that out.

While I think it might be an interesting exercise to increase the intensity of the sunset, I suspect it might spoil the subdued balance that you have at this time.

Well done.
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Postby kipper on Sat Apr 09, 2005 5:45 pm

Yeah, I don't think I have my PC setup correctly as I went through a full reinstalled so things are a bit out of whack regarding color setups.

Thanks for the great feedback. I was quite lucky because I had 2 shots both landscape and pretty much the same shot slightly rotated horizontally by 15. I love the one with the lamp post but felt the orange/pink sky didn't have as much impact because it was on the right side. Then I found the other shot that didn't have the lamp post but had the sky where I liked it. Then the alarm bells went off and I dumped them into Pano Factory and combined into 1 shot.

Ps. Killa, I have one of the tallship :)
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Postby Killakoala on Sat Apr 09, 2005 6:00 pm

Captain James Cook sailed a coal-carrier as an apprentice out of Whitby before he joined the Royal Navy. He would have passed by that spot many times on his way out to London. A lot of the buildings in that photo (and in Whitby) would have been there then.
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Postby Neeper on Sat Apr 09, 2005 6:09 pm

Very nice picture. Looks like a beautiful locale.
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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Apr 09, 2005 6:21 pm

Fabulous pic kipper with beautiful tones :D
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Postby SoCal Steve on Sat Apr 09, 2005 6:29 pm

I love that one too, Kipper. One sweet shot! That's one that I'd definitely frame and hang! Nice work. :wink:
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Postby kipper on Sat Apr 09, 2005 8:02 pm

Tried applying a Velvia action to it to bring out the colors. Increased contrast by 10, and brightness by about -5 to -10.

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