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Postby Hlop on Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:20 am

Hi All,

Fond this birdy near local golf club. Looks like a hawk to me but I don't know exactly what it is

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Postby Manta on Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:38 am

Lovely shot Hlop. I'd like to see more detail in the shadowy area around her right eye but, apart from that, this is a winner for me.

I'm pretty sure this is an adult female Nankeen Kestrel (Falco cenchroides), one of our most common raptors. Where females and juveniles have a rufous (reddish) head, the adult males have pale grey. Juveniles have darker streaking on the breast; this one seems quite light which leads me to believe it's probably an adult. I could very well be wrong though!

Gorgeous bird nonetheless and beautifully captured. Well done!

What lens did you use?

(More photos: http://www.birdphotos.com.au/nankeenkestrelweb/)
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Postby JordanP on Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:57 am

Very nice Boke! Great composition. The image does look a tad soft though. Were you handholding a big focal length?
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Postby Manta on Sun Apr 10, 2005 10:00 am

I think that's a bit personal don't you Craig? :wink:
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Postby JordanP on Sun Apr 10, 2005 10:04 am

hmmmm.... really need to be a bit more careful don't I :wink:
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Postby Hlop on Sun Apr 10, 2005 10:06 am

Thanks for comments, guys!

Shot with 80-400VR at 400 handheld.
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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Apr 10, 2005 10:07 am

Mikhail - this is a very well caught pic, as said a tad soft but I like it. You can always tell a raptor by the beak - built to rip meat apart.
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Postby Killakoala on Sun Apr 10, 2005 10:17 am

Manta got the bird type exact, according to my Slater's field guide to Aussie birds. Nankeen Kestrel, (aka Australian Kestrel.)

The pole she is sitting on has seen better days :)

Nice portrait of a bird of prey in repose.

Interesting fact -
The Nankeen Kestrel is the most widely recorded bird in Australia.
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Postby Aussie Dave on Sun Apr 10, 2005 11:46 am

Hi hlop
hope you don't mind, I took the liberty of doing a quick PP job on the eye in shadow....

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What do you think ??

In PSCS, I selected the shadowed area, used "Shadow/Highlight adjustment", a little brightness contrast, some clone from the Lt brown feathered chest (under the beak's shadow) then blurred the edges of the selection....
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Postby Manta on Sun Apr 10, 2005 3:16 pm

Nice job Dave. Amazing what PS can do when you start with a high quality original as provided here by Mikhail.
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Postby kipper on Sun Apr 10, 2005 3:19 pm

Where you find these critters I don't know. I've been trying to find some birds of prey but haven't had much luck.
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Postby Manta on Sun Apr 10, 2005 3:23 pm

Go bush young man...

Sometimes you don't even have to go too far. They're very prolific around any open pasture areas. Particularly now with everywhere so dry and the prey taking more chances in order to find water.
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Postby Hlop on Sun Apr 10, 2005 4:00 pm

Aussie Dave wrote:Hi hlop
hope you don't mind, I took the liberty of doing a quick PP job on the eye in shadow....

........
What do you think ??

In PSCS, I selected the shadowed area, used "Shadow/Highlight adjustment", a little brightness contrast, some clone from the Lt brown feathered chest (under the beak's shadow) then blurred the edges of the selection....


Well done Dave! I really like it :)
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Postby kipper on Sun Apr 10, 2005 4:01 pm

Dude, I was in an open pasture area (Koroit) a few weeks back. Not one spotted.
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Postby Manta on Sun Apr 10, 2005 4:10 pm

Being from a "little" further north I'm not familiar with the region Darryl. These guys are pretty widespread though so I'm surprised you didn't see any. Only a handful of species venture south into northern Victoria but the Nankeens range certainly extends that far. MIght be other reasons for it; seasonal migrations, food source, breeding habits, etc. Better mnds than mine could probably point you in the right direction, specific to the Victoria region.

Oh and it's been a long time since anyone called me "dude". :wink:
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