Pano of a bridge at night

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Pano of a bridge at night

Postby owen on Sun Apr 10, 2005 7:25 pm

Hi Guys. I posted this on the other site but it seemed to slip past relatively unnoticed. Can you guys tell me how to improve this shot? I have plans to shoot at dusk or dawn to get some colour in the sky.

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Postby Deano on Sun Apr 10, 2005 7:40 pm

Owen,

My initial reaction was to notice the building on the left appears to be falling down the hill. May need a perpsective alignment.

I think this would look good with some colour in the sky and water reflection. Where is the sun going to rise/set?

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Postby dooda on Sun Apr 10, 2005 7:45 pm

I'm not sure exactly what you're trying to do. It's a nice photo, it has depth, the subject is good, but not mindblowing.

I don't know if you reallyl need the building on the left side. It is really bright, and detracts from the bridge (which I assume is the subject). Might make for an interesting dawn/dusk image though. Look forward to seeing some more shots and comparing them.
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