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new bmx rink photos

Postby christiand on Sat Apr 16, 2005 11:02 pm

Hi all,

I had a second little photo shoot at the BMx rink today:


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all comments are welcome.

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Postby Matt. K on Sat Apr 16, 2005 11:45 pm

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Excellent action shot...but the colour balance seems to be way too warm on my monitor. The black tyre is not neutral. I opened the image in PS and adjusted by -34 cyan and that improved the colours. Even PS's auto colour did a good job. Do you have a new monitor?
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Postby MCWB on Sat Apr 16, 2005 11:54 pm

Yup, same as Matt, the image is definitely too warm. Superb capture though, any more from your shoot? :)
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Postby christiand on Sat Apr 16, 2005 11:55 pm

Hi Matt,

I must admit, I was lazy and choose autolevels in PS.
Well spotted and thanks for your comment.
The original without auto level is this:

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a few more

Postby christiand on Sun Apr 17, 2005 12:00 am

Hi MCWB,

there are some few more shots here:

http://christiand.smugmug.com/gallery/484897

I now conclude that lazyness doesn't pay - I shouldn't have
selected auto levels in PS.

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Postby redline on Sun Apr 17, 2005 12:05 am

great capture,
however i think it should be a tad sharper
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Postby MCWB on Sun Apr 17, 2005 12:15 am

Thanks Christian! Looks like number 1 could have used some elbow pads. :oops: 70-200 VR I presume?
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Postby christiand on Sun Apr 17, 2005 12:16 am

Hi redline,

thank you for your input.
What are the focussing techniques that you are applying in motorsports
for example ?
I'm struggling between too much DOF and too little DOF on a moving object that is heading towards me.
How do you manage ?

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Postby christiand on Sun Apr 17, 2005 12:18 am

MCWB,

70-200VR it is.
Well spotted.

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Postby redline on Sun Apr 17, 2005 12:26 am

to me i think the photo looks a bit cropped correct me if iam wrong?
any i usually use af-c - dynamic af modes.
but i think what happened in your photo is that your have use a shutter speed which gives the wheel treads a blurred look, but resulted in slightly blur rider hence lack of sharpness. how fast was the shutter speed?
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Postby christiand on Sun Apr 17, 2005 12:41 am

Thanks redline,

I actually pre-focussed on the area where I thought the object would appear,
then switched the camera to manual focus and left the focus there.
Shutter speed 1/250,
aperture f4
focal length 90mm

Bye for now.

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Postby Matt. K on Sun Apr 17, 2005 4:45 pm

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Colour purrfect! Try this to add a little punch. In PS go to FILTERS/UNSHARP MASK and try the following settings...20/40/0
That should give it a nice little pop.
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Postby MHD on Sun Apr 17, 2005 4:50 pm

I would also boost the sat a little...

Paid shoot? What bike park? Do they mind people shooting?
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Postby christiand on Mon Apr 18, 2005 10:39 pm

Hi Matt,

I tried your suggestion, FILTERS/UNSHARP MASK 20/40/0
Interesting result, I like it.

Thanks very much
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