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Impressionist "Bird on the Wire"

PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2005 12:49 am
by SoCal Steve
I've been listening to a lot of Leonard Cohen's music again lately (e.g. "Bird on a Wire") and was shooting pictures in the backyard at sunrise this morning. My ISO was 1600 so I decided to just work with it. Anybody like it 'cept me?

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PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2005 1:00 am
by Nnnnsic
I think it needs more of the blue space with more of the wire extended throughout it personally... and you should get rid of the text on it.

Otherwise I like it. :)

PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2005 1:26 am
by PiroStitch
Agreed with removing the text. Also try cropping out the bottom right corner as it's distracting and doesn't really have much to do with the actual subject manner described by the title.

PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2005 9:02 pm
by mudder
Agree with Piro about cropping out the bottom right corner, I like it as an abstract, like an album cover or something... Dunno if I'd understand the style though without the title...

PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2005 9:36 pm
by SoCal Steve
Thanks! :wink: