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 by atencati on Thu Oct 21, 2004 9:30 am
Any shooting suggestions would be greatly appreciated
click the link for the full size.
http://www.sierrafirerescue.com/Enzo/102004.jpg
Thanks Again!
Andy
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DateTime : 2004:10:20 14:34:07
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DateTimeOriginal : 2004:10:20 14:12:48
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Blackberry PIN: 2029497E
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by MHD on Thu Oct 21, 2004 9:37 am
That would depend on what you are trying to achieve.
I would very lightly fill flash (adjusting the white ballance to suit)
I might have tried to frame it with the line of the dog's head running up and down
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by atencati on Thu Oct 21, 2004 11:28 am
What I would have liked was a little more clarity in the background (depth of field?) and a little less shadow on the left. Thanks again!!
Andy
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by Killakoala on Thu Oct 21, 2004 10:54 pm
I like it. The composition is excellent and i am drawn towards sympathy for the dog as a result of it's expression. You've captured the dog's mood really well. Having one eye in the dark seems to accentuate the dog's remorse.
As for Post-Processing i would do the following
Unsharp Mask
Adjust contrast
Adjust white balance
Reduce the light side of the curve
Increase the dark side of the curve
Run it through colour noise reduction
But that's what i would do normally anyway to any photo i term a 'keeper'.
Steve.
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