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Autumn Leaves

PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2005 9:01 pm
by tsanglabs
Tested out my 50mm 1.8 at the Melbourne Botanical Gardens on Sunday. Here is one of the results.

Image

Update: Here is another version of the image

Image

Personally I quite like the original version

PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2005 10:33 pm
by mic
Great colour & Out Of Focus background there David, great time of the year.

Good little performer the mighty little 50mm Stubbie.

Mic. :wink:

PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2005 10:47 pm
by SoCal Steve
I think I understand why Boke means mess in Japanese. Gotta crop some of that top off. Then you've got a real nice image there.

PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2005 11:14 pm
by christiand
NICE photo,

I agree with SoCalSteve.
Perhaps cut in half and show the bottom half only.

Cheers
CD

PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2005 9:32 am
by big pix
OR you could add a GAUSSIAN BLUR to the background to make the area in focus stand out more........

cheers
bp

EDIT: you could also lighten or darken the background at this stage......

PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2005 9:40 am
by darb
hmmm autumn ... great colour capture. The composition bugs me a smidge with the top 2/3rd of the image ... maybe a slight crop might bring it back ... but horses for courses.

PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2005 1:21 pm
by stubbsy
David

I, too, find the large amount of quite harsh boke at the top distracts greatly from what is otherwise a wonderful shot. I think the rich autumn hues you've captured would work much better with some judicious cropping of the top and/or a gaussian blur on the background as has already been suggested.

PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2005 1:31 pm
by tsanglabs
I will try out your suggestions tonight to see what I come out with.

PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2005 4:15 pm
by flipfrog
tsanglabs:
great image, love the dof, and i like your avatar too!!

PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2005 4:23 pm
by PiroStitch
The DOF is good but I think because it's not a smooth pattern, it's a bit distracting from the autum leaves itself :) Hope that made sense.

PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2005 9:57 pm
by tsanglabs
OK posted a different version

PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2005 10:00 pm
by mic
Thats better :D

PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2005 11:07 pm
by jethro
grab the top half its peacefull and mysterious

PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2005 12:09 am
by PiroStitch
Prefer the second one :D