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busy street scene

Postby redline on Sun May 29, 2005 4:37 pm

a class assignment was to shoot a busy street scene for an overpass. but it needed emphaise speed and motion. most of my class mates shot long exp of highways with the headlights flowing like rivers thru the highway.
heres what i came up with
ignore the white bits of the border

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Postby sirhc55 on Sun May 29, 2005 6:27 pm

Well defined Redline. I like the fact that the centre people are identifiable whereas the side has more motion.
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Postby embi on Sun May 29, 2005 6:47 pm

Great image. Where do you study?
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Postby mudder on Sun May 29, 2005 9:16 pm

Good alternative interpretation to the theme, very artistic and creative...
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Postby redline on Mon May 30, 2005 10:57 am

thanks guys, its Nmit embi
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Postby BBJ on Mon May 30, 2005 11:55 am

Hi Thai, It's Different mate but i guess this is ok considering the rest of the class and well it works.
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Postby redline on Mon May 30, 2005 12:05 pm

Hey Big John,
its a b/w class i liked the color version better. but someone in my class mention the image kinda looks like daredevils fpv of the word he sees.
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